Question

【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分二

My mother works as doctor in No. 1 People’ s Hospital. She is devoted to her work and treats her patients kind. It’s said that she sometimes pay for the cost of medicine and treatment for some poor patients. Many people praise her for her great virtue or her excellent medical level, she is always busy cared for her patients and often works overtime. Sometimes I can' t see her at home for several day. Once I complained to her because of she hardly had time to accompany myself. She smiles and told me that her patients were most important than our family members.

Answer 1

【答案】1. doctor 前 a

2. kind → kindly

3. pay → pays

4. or →and

5. cared → caring

6. day → days

7.去掉because后的of

8. myself → me

9. smiles → smiled

10. most → more

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者的母亲是一名医生，对患者非常关心，由于大部分时间在医院，所以没有太多时间陪家人。

1. 考查冠词。doctor是可数名词，该句的主语是“My mother”，所以此处泛指“一名医生”，且doctor的读音是以辅音音素开头，所以用不定冠词a。故在doctor前加a。

2. 考查副词。分析句子可知，此处应用副词修饰动词treats。故将kind改为kindly。

3. 考查主谓一致。分析句子可知，that引导的宾语从句中主语是she，所以动词用第三人称单数形式。故将pay改为pays。

4. 考查连词。句意：许多人称赞她伟大的美德和优秀的医疗水平。分析句子并根据句意可知，her great virtue和her excellent medical level之间是并列关系，所以用连词and。故将or改为and。

5. 考查非谓语动词。busy doing sth.是固定搭配，意为“忙于做某事”。故将cared改为caring。

6. 考查名词的复数。day是可数名词，根据前面的several可知，此处应用复数形式。故将day改为days。

7. 考查连词。because是从属连词,引导原因状语从句，because of是介词短语,后接名词(短语)、代词、动名词。she hardly had time to accompany myself是一个句子，所以此处应用连词because。故去掉because后的of。

8. 考查代词。分析句子可知，该句的主语是she，宾语是me，当主宾是同一个人时用反身代词，所以此处应用代词的宾格me。故将myself改为me。

9. 考查时态。根据后面的and told可知，此处也用一般过去时与told并列。故将smiles 改为 smiled。

10. 考查形容词的比较等级。根据后面的介词than可知，此处应用形容词的比较级more。故将most 改为 more。