题目内容
6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者不计分．Generally，we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best．However，it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have serious problems in our lives．Parents have gained some life experiences and they know what to act in different situations．That's why we should
ask them for help first when they have problems．Therefore，there are moments when we avoid them and don't want to follow them．With time passed，my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right．Please turn for your parents when in trouble，for they worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time．
分析 一般来说，我们喜欢做的事情的方式我们认为是最好的．可是在我们有问题时向那些爱我们的人寻求建议也是很重要的．父母的生活经验是我们求助于他们的原因．但是有时我们会避开他们，不想跟着他们．然而随着时间的流逝，我们会知道父母是值得信任的．
解答 Generally，we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best．However，it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have serious problems in our lives．Parents have gained some lifeexperiencesand they know what to act in different situations．That's why we should
ask them for help first when they have problems．Therefore，there are moments when we avoid them and don't want to follow them．With time passed，my brother as well as Ihaverealized that our parents are right．Please turn foryour parents when in trouble，for they∧worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time．
解析：
1．considered→consider．考查谓语动词的时态．根据Generally表示"一般来说"可知谓语动词用一般现在时态，所以用consider．
2．去掉an．考查冠词．advice是不可数名词，所以去掉an．
3．experiences→experience．考查单词多义．experience 表示"经历"时是可数名词；表示"经验"是不可数名词，本句表示"父母获得生活经验"，所以用experience．
4．what→how．考查疑问词．修饰to act in different situations，表示"在不同的情况下怎样做"，应该用 how．
5．they→we．考查代词．和主语we呼应用we，表示"我们有问题时应该向他们求助"．
6．Therefore→However．考查连词． there are moments when we avoid them and don't want to follow them表示"有时我们会避开他们，不想跟着他们"，这和上文是转折关系，所以用However．
7．passed→passing．考查with的复合结构．因为time 和pass主句是主动关系，所以用passing，表示"随着时间的流逝"．
8．have→has．考查主谓一致关系． my brother as well as I做主语时用就远原则，所以谓语动词用第三人称单数has．
9．for→to．考查动词短语．turn to sb表示"向某人求助"．
10．they 和worth中间加are．考查系动词．worth是形容词，所以用be worth doing表示"值得做某事"．
点评 考查短文改错．
with的复合结构．
1、with或without+名词/代词+动词不定式，此时，不定式表示将发生的动作．
例句：With no one to talk to，John felt miserable．由于没人可以说话的人，约翰感到很悲哀．（原因状语）
2、with+名词 （或代词）+现在分词，此时，现在分词和前面的名词或代词是逻辑上的主谓关系．
例句：With the crowds cheering，they drove to the palace．在人群的欢呼声中，他们驱车来到皇宫．（伴随情况）
3、with+名词 （或代词）+过去分词，此时，过去分词和前面的名词或代词是逻辑上的动宾关系．
例句：I sat in my room for a few minutes with my eyes fixed on the ceiling．我在房间坐了一会儿，眼睛盯着天花板．（伴随情况）
