题目内容
【题目】文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter. If I am you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health, so he should take more exercises by riding a bike to have his body build up. In the meanwhile, you can often go out by bike together, which is helpfully in rebuilding your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is environmentally friendly means of transport. It is convenient to get around as well. Apart from giving him a gift,and you can also adopt other means,such as traveling,seeing a movie,having dinner and going shopping.No matter how you do,being sincere was the most important. I really hope that we can make up and be good friends forever.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【答案】1. make→making
2. am→were
3.exercises→exercise
4 build→built
5.helpfully→helpful
6. is后加an
7.去掉and
8.how→what
9.was→is
10.we →you
【解析】
本文是一封建议信。汤姆和彼得想要和好,作者给他提出了几点建议。
第一处:考查非谓语动词。句意:听说你考虑和彼得和好,我很高兴。固定用法:consider doing sth.“考虑做某事”,此处做considering的宾语,用动名词。故make改为making。
第二处:考查虚拟语气。句意:如果我是你,我会考虑送他一辆自行车作为生日礼物。根据主句中的would分析可知,此处是if引导的虚拟语气,根据语境,表示与现在事实相反,从句谓语动词用过去时,be动词使用were。故am改为were。
第三处:考查名词。句意:据我所知,彼得的身体一直不好,所以他应该多锻炼,通过骑自行车来增强体质。本句的take exercise表示“锻炼”,是固定短语,exercise不可数名词。故exercises改为exercise。
第四处:考查非谓语动词。句意:据我所知,彼得的身体一直不好,所以他应该多锻炼,骑自行车来增强体质。此处做have his body的宾补,表示“被增强”,用过去分词built。故build改为built。
第五处:考查形容词。句意:同时,你们可以经常一起骑自行车外出,这有助于重建你们的友谊。分析句子结构可知,此处缺少形容词,与系动词is构成系表结构。故helpfully改为helpful。
第六处:考查冠词。句意:此外,骑自行车是一种环保的交通方式。此处泛指“一种环保的交通方式”,应使用不定冠词,因environmentally是以元音音素开头的,应使用不定冠词an。故is后加an。
第七处:考查句子结构。句意:除了送他礼物,你还可以采取其他方式,如旅游,看电影,吃饭和购物。Apart from giving him a gift是状语,所以you can also adopt other means是一个简单句,不需要连词。故去掉and。
第八处:考查让步状语从句连接词。句意:无论你做什么,真诚是最重要的。此处和No matter一起引导让步状语从句,做从句do的宾语,根据句意分析,应使用what“什么”引导。故how改为what。
第九处:考查时态。句意:无论你做什么,真诚是最重要的。根据句意可知,此处描述的是客观事实,应使用一般现在时。故was改为is。
第十处:考查代词。句意:我真的希望你们能和好如初,永远都是好朋友。根据上文的that you are considering make up with Peter可知,此处做can make up的主语,意为“你们能和好”。故we改为you。