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12．假如你是学生会负责人，学校将在五月份与美国姊妹学校共同开展文化月活动，校报急需在学校内聘一位同学任英文版的编辑，请你用英文写一则招聘启事，并请感兴趣的同学于4月31日前与学生会联系．主要内容如下：
1．主要工作：
①从英文报刊杂志及互联网上选择有关中西方文化的文章；
②选择与编辑同学们的来稿．
2．应聘要求：
①乐意奉献出一些业余时间为同学们服务；
②英文与美术皆好；能熟练使用电脑．
注意：1．词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当加入细节，以使充实、行文连贯，请勿提及真实学校名称．

A Cultural Month activity will be carried out in May between our school and our sister school in the USA．So theschool newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition．The job mainly includes two parts：One is to choose proper English articlesabout culturesof China and western countriesfrom other newspapers，magazines or Internet．The other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use．
We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements：First，he/she is willing to devote some of his/her spare time to serving the others．Second，it's necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine arts．Besides，the ability to use the computer is important．
Those who are interested in the job，please get in touch with the Students'Union before April 31st．
The Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一则招聘启事，招聘一位同学任英文版的编辑，请感兴趣的同学于4月31日前与学生会联系．
写作时人称以第一人称和第三为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．主要工作：①从英文报刊杂志及互联网上选择有关中西方文化的文章；②选择与编辑同学们的来稿．2．应聘要求：①乐意奉献出一些业余时间为同学们服务；②英文与美术皆好；能熟练使用电脑．

重要短语：carry out （实施），look for （寻找），pick out （挑选出），meet the requirements（满足要求），be willing to do sth （愿意做某事），devote time to doing （致力于做某事），be good at（擅长某事），the ability to do sth （做某事的能力…），be interested in （感兴趣），get in touch with （联系，接触）．

【高分句型】
1．The other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use．
此处是由过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰代词"those"．
2．Those who are interested in the job，please get in touch with the Students'Union before April 31st．
此处是由关系代词"who"引导定语从句，"who"在从句中作主语，指代前面的先行词"those"．

解答 A Cultural Month activity will be carried out in May between our school and our sister school in the USA．So the school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition．The job mainly includes two parts：One is to choose proper English articles about cultures of China and western countries from other newspapers，magazines or Internet．The other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use．【高分句型】（主要工作：①从英文报刊杂志及互联网上选择有关中西方文化的文章；②选择与编辑同学们的来稿）
We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements：First，he/she is willing to devote some of his/her spare time to serving the others．Second，it's necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine arts．Besides，the ability to use the computer is important．（应聘要求：①乐意奉献出一些业余时间为同学们服务；②英文与美术皆好；能熟练使用电脑）
Those who are interested in the job，please get in touch with the Students'Union before April 31st．【高分句型】

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．