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18.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Last night my brother and I went to visit a friend of me.It was a wonderfully visit.We shared much interesting things in our childhood.It was the very long drive so on the way back we stopped at a restaurant eat.He paid the bill with a tip that was five times the amount of her bill.He was too generous that the waitress could not believe he gives her that much.Back in the car I asked him that why he had left such a big tip and he responded that it would make her happier.I think he must have thought she was tired.

分析 昨天晚上我和哥哥去拜访一个朋友,回来的路上去一家饭店吃饭,结账时哥哥给了服务员很多小费,他那么慷慨以至于服务员都不敢相信.回到车上我问哥哥为什么给那么多小费,哥哥说会使服务员更高兴,我想他肯定是认为服务员太累了.

解答 Last night my brother and I went to visit a friend of me.It was a wonderfully visit.We shared much interesting things in our childhood.It was the very long drive so on the way back we stopped at a restaurant∧eat.He paid the bill with a tip that was five times the amount of her bill.He was too generous that the waitress could not believe he gives her that much.Back in the car I asked him that why he had left such a big tip and he responded that it would make her∧happier.I think he must have thought she was tired.
详解:
1.me改为mine;考查名词性物主代词,这里用名词性物主代词mine作介词of的宾语. 
2.wonderfully改为wonderful;考查形容词,此处用形容词作定语,修饰名词visit.    
3.much改为many;考查同义词辨析,much和many都指"很多",但much修饰不可数名词,many修饰可数名词的复数形式,所以这里用many修饰  interesting things.  
4.the改为a;考查冠词,这里用不定冠词a表示泛指.
5.eat改为to eat;考查动词不定式,此处不定式表示目的,意为"停下来去吃饭".
6.her改为his;考查形容词性物主代词,分析句意可知这里的物主代词要与主语he保持一致,故用his.    
7.too改为so;考查副词,这里用so与后面的that构成"so…that"短语,意为"如此…以至于".
8.gives改为gave;考查动词的时态,本文讲的是"昨天晚上"发生的是,这里的动作发生在过去,要与一般过去时.   
9.去掉that;考查宾语从句,分析句意为"我问他为什么给服务员那么多小费",所以此处用why引导一个宾语从句,that多余,故去掉.
10.happier前面加much;考查副词,分析句意为"这样会使服务员更高兴",这里要用一个副词much来修饰比较级happier.

点评 短文改错题首先要通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确.

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