Question

13．In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文．词数不少于50．（请将开放作文写在答题卡指定区域内）

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画类写作，要求我们仔细看图，根据题目要求写成自己的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：对于打翻的牛奶，两人的看法不同，描述图画并揭示其寓意．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为描述图画．第二部分为揭示其寓意．第三部分为发表评论．
重点短语与句型：
tend to 常常，往往，倾向，趋向
blame sth on sb 把某事归咎于某人
By contrast相比而言
persist to 坚持
pay off成功，有好结果，回报
高分句型一：One exclaims"Oh，God，it's all finished!''whereas the other one is more positive and calm，claiming that"there is still some left．"此句用了现在分词claiming 作伴随状语
高分句型二：With strong willpower，they would persist to the end，convinced that as long as they keep trying，their hard efforts would pay off．此句 用了过去分词convinced 作伴随状语，that 从句中又含有一个as long as引导的条件状语从句．
高分句型三：Those are the people who can often succeed where others  fail此句既有who引导的定语从句，又有where引导的地点状语从句．

解答 As an English proverb goes，"it is no use crying over the spilt milk''．This picture precisely captures one of such situations-a bottle of milk has been accidentally dropped onto the ground．The reactions of the two individuals in the pictures are totally different．One exclaims"Oh，God，it's all finished!''whereas the other one is more positive and calm，claiming that"there is still some left．"（高分句型一）（描述图画）
There are rich implications underlying this scene．For the same event，two different individuals make two totally different  observations and comments．For the pessimistic mind，they tend to give up．Finally，they would blame the failure on others．（揭示其寓意）
By contrast，people with an optimistic state of mind would turn the negative into the positive，through efforts．With strong willpower，they would persist to the end，convinced that as long as they keep trying，their hard efforts would pay off．（高分句型二） Those are the people who can often succeed where others fail．（高分句型三）Obviously，they are the people whom we should try to emulate．（发表评论）．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．