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【题目】假如你是李华。来自澳大利亚的交换生Kenton首次离家来中国读书,因生活上和语言交流上有困难,他萌生了回家的念头。不知如何是好的他在某网站上发帖求助,请你据此给他回帖。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Kenton,

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I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Kenton,

I am sorry to hear you have difficulty with life and communication abroad, but I am willing to help you out of the trouble.

To tell you the truth, it is natural that you are missing your parents and want to go home. But personally, I don’t think we can live with our parents all the life. Thus, it is a good chance for you to be more independent. You can call your parents more often instead of giving up your study.

If you don’t mind, I would like to be your friend. We can chat online frequently, which will improve your Chinese a lot. Only by communicating with others can you overcome your difficulties.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】首先审题,这篇文章要求假如你是李华。来自澳大利亚的交换生Kenton首次离家来中国读书,因生活上和语言交流上有困难,他萌生了回家的念头。不知如何是好的他在某网站上发帖求助,请你据此给他回帖。其次选用正确的人称和时态,用一般现在时第二人称来写。然后写出单个句子,使用正确的连词,连句成段。具体来说,写这篇文章时,要注意:大体分三个段落来写,第一自然段说明自己愿意帮助他解决问题;第二自然段提出具体的解决方案并表示自己愿意和他交朋友;第三自然段期待他的答复文中给出的细节都要包括,不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: be willing to愿意,To tell you the truth说实话还使用了宾语从句I am sorry to hear you have difficulty with life and communication abroad, but I am willing to help you out of the trouble.和主语从句To tell you the truth, it is natural that you are missing your parents and want to go home.提升了文章的整体水平。

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【题目】阅读下列短文,从每题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出最佳选项。
At the beginning of the century there was a big farm called Hollywood Ranch. It was near Los Angeles in California. A few years later Hollywood was one of the famous places in the world. From the 1910s to the 1950s Hollywood was the film center of the world. Every family knew the names of its film stars—Charlie Chaplin,Greta Garbo,Bergman and hundreds more.
The reason why people went to Hollywood to make films was the sun. At first people made films in New York on the east coast of the United States. But then they heard about Los Angeles where there are 350 days of sun every year. As they made all the films by sunlight,the west coast was a much better place to work. Also near Hollywood you can find mountains and sea and desert. They did not have to travel far to make any kind of film.
When TV became popular,Hollywood started making films for television. Then in 1970s they discovered people still went to the cinema to see big expensive films. After twenty years they are still making films in Hollywood and people watch them all over the world.
(1)Hollywood used to be a ________.
A.cinema
B.big farm
C.park
D.market
(2)In the 1910s Hollywood became a ________.
A.famous theater
B.good place to have holidays
C.film center
D.home for stars
(3)Who was not mentioned as a film star in the passage?
A.Charlie Chaplin.
B.Marilyn Monroe.
C.Ingrid Bergman.
D.Greta Garbo.
(4)People went to Hollywood to make films because ______.
A.it was a beautiful place
B.you can find many film stars
C.there was a lot of sunlight there
D.it was a famous place

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