题目内容
【题目】假定你是本校学生李华。本月将有15名来自法国阿尔伯特加缪高中(Albert Camus High School)的学生来你校参加“游学”( Study Abroad)活动。学校现从学生中招募15个义务接待家庭。请你根据以下要点用英文给负责此项目工作的Mr. Zhang写一封申请信。
1.你的家庭情况;
2.你家的居住条件及与学校的距离;
3.你家作为接待家庭的优势。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Zhang
It is nice to learn that 15 students from France will come to our school for a Study Ab_______________
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,
It is nice to learn that 15 students from France will come to our school for a Study Abroad program. After I consulted with my parents, my family would like to be a host family to one of
them. We have the following advantages.
First of all, my dad is a university teacher and my mum is a saleswoman in a shop. We all can speak English, so it will be easy for us to communicate with our guest. Besides, we have a spare room with a washroom and shower for our guest’s convenience. What’s more, my home is within easy reach of the school, and it normally takes about 10 minutes by subway or 25 minutes by bus. In addition, my mum is good at cooking. I believe my guest will have a pleasant stay with my family.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】考查提纲类短文写作。本作文中给出的要点比较具体。故需要准确表达。分析可知,假定你是本校学生李华。本月将有15名来自法国阿尔伯特加缪高中(Albert Camus High School)的学生来你校参加“游学”活动。学校现从学生中招募15个义务接待家庭。请根据要点用英文给负责此项目工作的Mr. Zhang写一封申请信。包括:
1.你的家庭情况;
2.你家的居住条件及与学校的距离;
3.你家作为接待家庭的优势。
写作时要注意准确运用时态。
分析后可知本文要用一般现在时,第一人称和第三人称。
本文亮点:
短文中使用了一些顺序连词如:first of all,...besides,… in addition,…使短文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
本文中同时也使用高级词汇和高级句型。从而使文章显得更有档次。一些高级的短语和句式。如consult with,for our guest’s convenience,within easy reach of the school, look forward to …。