假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除和修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I used to spend much happy time with my grandfather．But as I grow up，I gradually started to become self-centered．One day we went shopping together and took the wrong buses．I could not stay calmly and shouted rudely at him．I was such stubborn that I wouldn't say sorry to him，believing he had done nothing wrong．Yet，because I truly wanted to express my regret，my grandfather was gone forever，left me no chance to say even the simple words："I'm sorry"．Therefore，make the most every second you have with your loved ones，for the time keeps going，waiting for no one．

分析我和爷爷一起度过了很多幸福的时光．可随着我渐渐长大，我开始变得以自我为中心．有一天因为搭错了公交车，我就对爷爷大喊大叫，固执地认为自己没错．当我想向爷爷道歉时，他已经不在了．好好珍惜和自己深爱的人在一起的时光吧！时间不会给你等待的机会．

解答 I used to spend much happy time with my grandfather．But as I grow up，I gradually started to become self-centered．
                                                                                               grew
One day we went shopping together and took the wrong buses．I could not stay calmly and shouted rudely at him．
                                                                                  bus                               calm
I was such stubborn that I wouldn't say sorry to him，believing he had done nothing wrong．
         so                                                                                   I
Yet，because I truly wanted to express my regret，my grandfather was gone forever，left me no chance
         when                                                                                                             leaving
to say even the simple words："I'm sorry"．Therefore，make the most∧every second
                       simplest                                                                         加of
you have with your loved ones，for the time keeps going，waiting for no one．
                                                    去掉
1．grow改为grew．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
2．buses改为bus．句意表达的是一辆公交车，特指搭错的那辆车，要用单数．
3．calmly改为calm．题干中stay表示保持的意思，具有系动词的特征，后接形容词作表语．
4．such改为so．句中stubborn是形容词，固执的，要用so来修饰，构成so…that…结构，表示如此…以致…的意思．
5．he改为I．逻辑指代错误，句意表达的是我觉得自己没错．
6．because改为when．题干中前后句子没有因果关系，而是表达当…的时候．
7．left改为leaving．句中leave作结果状语，没有连词，要用非谓语动词形式．题干表示的是主动，要用现在分词形式．
8．simple改为simplest．句中even表达的是强调含义，定冠词the不是表示特指，而是用在最高级形容词之前．
9．加of．短语搭配，make the most （use）of sth充分利用．
10．the去掉．题干中time指代的是抽象时间，不表示特指，不用定冠词．

点评短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．

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7．EDGEWOOD-Every morning at Dixie Heights High School，customers pour into a special experiment：the district's first coffee shop run mostly by students with special learning needs．
   Well before classes start，students and teachers order Lattes，Cappuccinos and Hot Chocolates．Then，during the first period，teachers call in orders on their room phones，and students make deliveries．
   By closing time at 9.20 a．m．，the shop usually sells 90 drinks．
"Whoever made the chi tea，Ms．Schatzman says it was good，"Christy McKinley，a second year student，announced recently，after hanging up with the teacher．
  The shop is called the Dixie PIT，which stands for Power in Transition．Although some of the students are not disabled，many are，and the PIT helps them prepare for life after high school．
   They learn not only how to run a coffee shop but also how to deal with their affairs．They keep a timecard and receive paychecks，which they keep in check regis ters．
  Special-education teachers Kim Chevalier and Sue Casey introduced the Dixie PIT from a similar program at Kennesaw Mountain High School in Georgia．
  Not that it was easy．Chevalier's first problem to overcome was product-related．Should schools be selling coffee？What about sugar content？
  Kenton County Food Service Director Ginger Gray helped．She made sure all the drinks，which use non-fat milk，fell within nutrition （营养） guidelines．
  The whole school has joined in to help．
  Teachers agreed to give up their lounge （休息室） in the mornings．Art students painted the name of the shop on the wall．Business students designed the paychecks．The basketball team helped pay for cups．

59．What is the text mainly about？B
A．A best-selling coffee．
B．A special educational program．
C．Government support for schools．
D．A new type of teacher-student relationship．
60．The Dixie PIT program was introduced in order toC．
A．raise money for school affairs
B．do some research on nutrition
C．develop students'practical skills
D．supply teachers with drinks
61．We know from the text that Ginger GrayB．
A．manages the Dixie P1T program in Kenton County
B．sees that the drinks meet health standards
C．teaches at Dixie Height s High School
D．owns the school's coffee shop．

4．Here is some information for you if you want to make a visit to Xi'an．

Admission Fee：	CNY150 （March 1-end of November） CNY120 （December 1-end of February） The fare is for the Emperor Qin Shi Huang's Mausoleum Site Park Through Ticket including the Museum of Qin Terracotta Warriors and Horses，Lishan Garden and shuttle buses inside the scenic area．
Guide Services：	The exhibits are so well explained in both Chinese and English．However，visitors can also enjoy the guide services．It costs around CNY 100to hire a guide．
Ticket Selling Hours：	Sell tickets from 08：30to 17：00 （March 16-Nov.15），stop check-in at 18：35； Sell tickets from 08：30to 16：30 （Nov.16-March 15），stop check-in at 18：05
Transportation：	From Xi'an Xianyang International Airport： Visitors can take Airport Shuttle Line 2to Xi'an Railway Station．The bus departs every hour fro 10：15to 19：15at 1F of T2and the ticket costs CNY 25．Visitors can also hire a taxi from the airport and the fare is about CNY 200． From downtown Xi'an： Take tourism bus No.306from the east square of Xi'an Railway Station or 307from the south gate of Tang Paradise．The whole journey takes about one hour．The bus fare is CNY7per person．
Getting Around：	Battery-powered motor vehicles and ancient-style carriages are available for visitors to tour around the mausoleum． 30free shuttle buses are traveling between the Qin Shi Huang Mausoleum and the Museum of Qin Terracotta Warriors and Horses for tourists'convenience．One can take them by showing the entrance ticket．
Recommended Time for a Visit：	The museum is crowded in the morning because there are too many group visitors．Therefore，independent visitors may visit the museum in the early afternoon to avoid the crowds．However，they should not miss the last bus that returns from the museum to Xi'an at 19：00．

60．A couple who want to visit the Museum in January should pay at leastC．
A．CNY 120
B．CNY 150
C．CNY 240
D．CNY 300
61．It can be learned from the passage thatB．
A．guide services are free of charge
B．there are more visitors in the morning
C．most guides speak in more than two languages
D．visitors can get around by free motor cars
62．Which of the following is True according to the passage？A
A．Visitors with through tickets can take free shuttle buses．
B．The last bus returns from the Museum at 18：30．
C．Visitors can enter the Museum with a ticket at any time．
D．Bus No.307starts from the east of Xi'an Railway Station．
63．The passage is written toB．
A．introduce the history of Xi'an
B．give some detailed information to visitors to Xi'an
C．recommend transportation to tour around Xi'an
D．offer the guide services in Xi'an（　　）

11．We offer several distinct options for you to choose the ticket that suits you best

TICKET TYPE	DISCOUNT*	NOTES
Stand returns	20%	return within 60days of outward trip
Same day returns	25%	Ticket cannot be changed or refunded（退还）
Children	40%	Children between 4 and 11
Students	25%	Student card must be shown
Senior citizens	25%	seniors card must be shown
Groups （10-25 people）	15%	Discount on each section of the trip

*Only one discount may apply to each fare．
CHANGES AND REFUNDS
Tickets may be refunded not later than 5minutes before the departure of the train for a charge of 15%of the ticket price，or the journey may be changed to another day for a charge of 10%of the ticket price．（Not applicable to same day returns．）
CHANGES FOR SAME DAY TRAVEL
You may change your ticket once without charge for a journey on the same day as the original ticket．
INFORMATION OF INTEREST TO TRAVELLERS
•When you buy your ticket it is up to you to check that the dates and times of the journey on it are exactly as you requested．
•Ticket control and access to each train platform will be open until 2minutes before departure of the train．
•Each traveller may take one suitcase and one item of hand luggage．You may also check in 15kgs of luggage not later than 30minutes before departure，at 150extra charge．
•If you would like to charter a train，or make reservations for over 25passengers travelling together，call the Sales Department．

25．If a student buys a standard-return ticket，he/she will receive at most a discount ofB．
A．20%
B．25%
C．45%
D．50%
26．Which of the following statements is TRUE？C
A．All types of tickets can be changed for a charge of 20%of the ticket price．
B．You can get your ticket price refunded if you are 2minutes late for the train．
C．Travelers should be ready to board the train with at least 2minutes to spare．
D．Travelers will have to pay extra money for checking in 15kgs of luggage．
27．This passage is mainly written toA．
A．provide some information about train travel
B．describe the policies of changes and refunds
C．introduce the luggage allowance on the train
D．compare the discounts of different ticket types．

1．下面短文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Throughout history man has changed his physical environment in order to improving his way
of life．With the tools of technology that he has changed many physical feature of the earth．Thus，man's changes to the physical environment has not always had beneficial results．Today，pollution of the air and water is a increasing danger to the health of the planet．Like we know，massive destruction of environment has brought about positive effects on it and it even causes a great threat to man's existence．Therefore，effective measures should be take and laws passed to conserve environment．Otherwise，man will certain suffer from the serious consequences caused by this lack care for his living surroundings．

8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加/删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用\划掉．
修改：在错词的下面画-横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
A book corner will be set up in our classroom．Our teacher calls on everyone donate a book．I support the decision because of books are the stairs leading to success．Read is of great help to us．The book corner helps broaden our horizon，and making our out-of-class activities more colorfully．
The book I donate is"How to Improve Your English Writing"，that can be beneficial to students who have troubles in writing English compositions．First，it introduces different types of English writing or some skills to write well．Besides，it provides many useful expressions and structures．Also，we can get good tips give by some experts．So I hope it can help my classmates about their English writing as well．

4．Fear plays no part in this latest problem．"I'm not afraid I'll lose my children．I won't lose my children．We live together，and nothing，nothing，"she repeats，her voice rising when speaking to John's lawyer，"will stop me from being with my children．A law？Year，right．Don't disturb me when it comes to my children．You are never going to win．If John wants to see them，I cannot stop him．He's their father-I want them to see him!However，his visit in his present condition will disturb the children's stable （稳定的） life．"
   John，who has spent much of his time in California recently，has only hired a house for himself in Pennsylvania，according to his lawyer．"If he'd like to stick to a regular life，I'd be more than happy to do that，"Jane says．"The best thing for any child of a divorced （离婚的） parent is a stable life．I want nothing more than for him to set up a stable life for himself，so that he can be part of making our children's lives more stable．"
   While matters of money and care won't be settled for weeks，Jane hardly puts her life on．Last week the ABC network announced that Jane would return with her own show，Twist of Jane，in which she gives advice to other moms．Jane and her eight children will also return to ABC in a series  of  Jane Plus 8specials showing them on various adventures．It's a rest for Jane．who insists that she needs her new，busy life to provide for her family．"I have to lead such a life．and I'm thankful that I've built it to the top where now I can support my children．"she says．
   And  whether a bellicose（好斗的）dance judge or a bellicose former wife，Jane plans to keep  0n facing attacks on her．"Some people try to knock me down-only to make me more fierce，more protective，more determined to do better，"she says．"Go ahead，take me on．This will just make me stronger．"

57．According to Jane in the first paragraph，the lowA
A．can't take her children away from her
B．can't do anything with the case
C．will best settle the problem
D．will disturb her children
58．What does"to do that"refer to in the second paragraph？C
A．To live with John．
B．To hire a house for John．
C．To allow John to see the children
D．To ask John to set up a regular life．
59．What does the underlined sentence in the third paragraph mean？B
A．Jane's life is very difficult．
B．Jane continues to live as usual．
C．Jane almost can't control her lire
D．Jane works very hard to live a happy life．
60．Which word can best describe Jane？C
A．Proud．
B．Fierce．
C．Determined．
D．Independent．

5．

A		Simple Way to Boost Marital Happiness？Say‘Thank You' ‘Thank You'goes a long way to keeping couples happy．
B		Dads Struggle to Find Work-Life Balance Working dads say work-life balance is hard to find．
C		What Workers Want From Their Bosses…Besides Money Money isn't everything，and they need recognition as well．
D		Bosses Say It Is，Indeed，Lonely at the Top CEOs of public firms say they feel especially isolated．
E		Americans Say They are Healthy，But Not Wealthy Americans are evaluating the health of their personal finances with the same rigor as they do their physical health．
F		Higher Housework Burden Stresses Women Unequal employment and pay add to mom's stressors，because they make her feel the need to do more housework．

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