题目内容
假如你是李华,你的笔友Tom发来电子邮件询问你的音乐喜好和你在新年晚会上的表现。请你给他写封电子邮件,回答他的所有问题。
Dear Li Hua, From your last e-mail, I am glad to know you like music and performed at the New Year Party. I am eager to know what kind of music you like and dislike best and why. And since you are so busy with your studies, I want to know when and how you listen to music. Besides, at the New Year Party, did you sing or play a musical instrument? Is it a success? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Tom |
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的抬头与结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数。
Hi, Tom,
As you know, I’m music mad. _______________________________________________
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By the way, do you love music as well?
Hi, Tom
As you know, I’m music mad. Of all kinds of music, pop is my favorite. I am crazy about it. I think its lyrics are really catchy and meaningful and I can learn to sing easily. Pop makes my life delightful and alive. I can’t stand rock music. It’s too loud and noisy. Although I don’t have enough spare time to enjoy music, I often listen to it on MP3 on my way to school. At home if I don’t study, the music will be on all the time.
At the New Year Party, I played the violin in the school orchestra. I think we played pretty well. The audience gave us a big clap.
By the way, do you love music as well?
【解析】
试题分析:考查半开放性作文。半开放型作文是指试题给出部分要点,考生再增加一些要点。需要注意的是在写给出材料时不要遗漏要点,更不能曲解试题的意思。而在写自己增加部分时,也不是随意发挥,要吃透命题人的意思。本篇习作需要注意的是,命题人在给出要点时,是在材料文章中给出的,故要求考生仔细阅读材料,找出要回答的问题。然后在此基础上再发挥。本篇习作的给出要点就是几个问题:what kind of music you like and dislike best and why、when and how you listen to music以及did you sing or play a musical instrument? Is it a success?。
【亮点说明】本篇习作回答了来信中的几个问题,要点齐全,结构清晰。使用了一些高级词汇如:am crazy about、catchy and meaningful、delightful and alive、on my way to school、gave us a big clap。还使用了状语从句Although I don’t have enough spare time to enjoy music, I often…。
考点:考查半开放性作文