题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是学生李华,得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大,学习效果甚微,请你给他写一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。
内容要点:
1. 快乐学习,保持愉快的心情;
2. 积极参加体育活动,如打乒乓球、听音乐等;
3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已经为你写好。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
One Possible Version
Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. Here is some advice on how to study effectively.
First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.
Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.
I hope these can benefit you.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:
本文要求写一封电子邮件给自己的好朋友William,给他建议帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率,建议涉及三方面: 快乐学习,保持愉快的心情;积极参加体育活动,如打乒乓球、听音乐等;多与同学交流,互相鼓励。学写作时注意以下几点:1.涵盖所有内容。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用现在时,用第一人称。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。:
【亮点说明】
文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色,如 现在分词作结果状语 making study an easy job. making us memorize things faster and longer.;not only …but also,把not only放句首用倒装Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind,;which引导的非限制性定语从句……,which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study;还有First of all,Last but not least等有效地使语句间连接紧凑。