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【题目】书面表达

假设你是学生李华,得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大,学习效果甚微,请你给他写一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。

内容要点:

1. 快乐学习,保持愉快的心情;

2. 积极参加体育活动,如打乒乓球、听音乐

3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励。

注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已经为你写好

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【答案】

One Possible Version

Dear William,

Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. Here is some advice on how to study effectively.

First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.

Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.

I hope these can benefit you.

Best wishes!

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析:

本文要求写一封电子邮件给自己的好朋友William,给他建议帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率,建议涉及三方面: 快乐学习,保持愉快的心情;积极参加体育活动,如打乒乓球、听音乐等;多与同学交流,互相鼓励。学写作时注意以下几点:1.涵盖所有内容。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用现在时,用第一人称。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】

文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色,如 现在分词作结果状语 making study an easy job. making us memorize things faster and longer.;not only …but also,把not only放句首用倒装Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind,which引导的非限制性定语从句……,which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study;还有First of all,Last but not least等有效地使语句间连接紧凑。

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【题目】When building houses, people used to think about not only the climate of the areas but also the building materials and the fashions for their houses. However, since electricity became more and more expensive, people began to pay much more attention to the energy they could get for their houses and the new ways they could find to protect their houses from both cold and heat.

Houses of an old yet new type have been widely built. In some parts of the world, people share their houses with their livestock (家畜). During cold weather, they gather their cows, goats, or other animals and keep them on the first floor of their houses. The reasons are that the animals can be protected from the cold and that they can help to heat the houses as well. The body heat given off by the animals rises to the second floor of the houses, where people live. By sharing their houses with their livestock, people gain a source of heat.

People who live in or near cities do not usually keep livestock. However, home builders use the fact that heat rises. This natural law can be used in building houses in these areas. Instead of keeping livestock on the first floor, builders fill it with large rocks. As they are open to the sun’s rays during cold weather, these rocks take in heat. They also give off the heat, and, of course, the warm air rises into the living areas of the houses. So these houses are energy saving.

House building becomes a great challenge to building designers and energy engineers. They try to meet this challenge by learning from old traditions and by using modern technology. And someday in the future, people will be able to live in more energy saving houses.

【1】What did people begin to consider as electricity was no longer cheap?

A.The climate of their areas

B.The energy for their houses

C.The fashions for their houses

D.The building materials for their houses

2People in some areas gain a source of heat by _________.

A.Keeping their livestock downstairs

B.Protecting their livestock from the cold

C.Sharing their houses only with their cows

D.Living on the second floor with their livestock

3The underlined words “natural law” in the third paragraph refer to the fact that ________.

A.Heat raises the temperature in the houses

B.Heat increases the temperature of rocks

C.Heat goes up if temperature is raised

D.Heat goes in the upward direction

4From the passage, we can infer that __________.

A.People will no longer consider building materials in the future

B.Energy saving buildings will become more popular in the future

C.Almost all people will move into the houses heated by large rocks

D.Energy engineers will devote themselves only to modern technology.

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