Question

4．请根据下列表格中所提供的材料，结合你的生活经历，展开想象，以学生的身份用英语写一篇短文．注意：1．不要逐句翻译；2．词数100左右，开头已写好，不计入总词数．



We all have some keys in life，some visible and others invisible．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"图表+提纲类"形式，根据文章所给提示信息和自己的生活经历展开想象写一篇短文，阐述有关有形的钥匙和无形的钥匙．写作要点：1．有形的钥匙；2无形的钥匙；3．总结概括．既是提纲作文又是图表类作文．
写作时时态以一般现在时为主．人称以第一和第三人称为主．
重要短语：feel upset  （令人感到烦恼），listen to the teachers （听老师讲课），open the door of （打开…之门），tap the potential of （挖掘…的潜力），in a word （总之），It's convenient for us to do （做某事对某人来说是方便的），betroublesome（ 麻烦的），ownsth （拥有某物），a meaningful way of （做某事的一个有意义的方法）．
【高分句型】
1．From writing，we have a key to tapping the potential of our own，finding another colorful world and realizing a meaningful way of learning and living．这里是由两个并列的现在分词短语finding another colorful world and realizing a meaningful way of learning and living作状语，主句为we have a key to tapping the potential of our own，主句的主语为we与所给动词find和realize存在逻辑上的主动关系．
2．To us students，it's perhaps more important to own a key to opening the gate of wisdom．这里是主语从句，it作形式主语，其结构为"It+be+形容词+to do sth"．

解答 We all have some keys in life，some visible and othersinvisible．In our daily life，it's necessary and convenient for us to take thevisible ones．If we are careless to lose them，we'll feel upset and our lifemay be troublesome．（有形的钥匙）
．In fact，some invisible keys are also important to us in ourlife．As students，we study at school every day．By listening to the teachers，we own a key to research and discussion，and to learning how to get knowledge．Through reading，we get a key to opening the door of mystery and sharing theideas of great people of the past and the present．From writing，we have a keyto tapping the potential of our own，finding another colorful world andrealizing a meaningful way of learning and living．【高分句型】（无形的钥匙）
In a word，the two kinds of keys are equallynecessary in our life．To us students，it's perhaps more important to own a keyto opening the gate of wisdom．【高分句型】（总结概括）

点评 写好这类图表及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．