Question

【题目】请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Cleanliness is important to academic success at one Chinese university where compulsory labor is part of a program designed to award class credits while teaching students with proper moral values．

During winter，the sky is still dark at 6:30 a．m．when the first year students in Trade and Management College in Zhengzhou begin sweeping the 165 acre campus and it can take up to an hour．

Mr．Sun，the university official，said labor is good for building character and promotes “the spirit of hard work．” Some students also claim that they are always proud of the clean campus．They never litter because they’ve been through the labor and understand that they should respect the fruits of labor of others．

Some students，however，are against it because they feel the demands of the cleaning program are a distraction．Some often show up late and hungry to their morning classes after rushing to sweep the campus and clean their rooms．

写作内容：1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2．用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：

（1）支持或反对这个学校的做法；

用2 3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。

写作要求：1．可以支持文中任一观点，但必须提供理由或论据；

2．阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句；

3．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

4．不必写标题。

Answer 1

【答案】One university in Zhengzhou designs a program where students must clean the campus every day and relates it to class credits．Some people support the program while others do not．(30)Generally，I am in favor of the practice．To begin with，through their effort，students provide a clean and comfortable environment，which，as a result，is an assurance of their successful academic life．Moreover，cleaning and labor can not only serve to build students’ character but also contribute positively to students developing healthy routines and good sanitation habits．Last but not least，by enjoying the fruits of others’ labor，students will develop the awareness of gratitude and regard labor as a matter of honor．In short，carrying out the cleaning program is crucial．The significance for students of participating in it means more than academic success．It is part of moral education and benefits students as well as the campus．(120) 反对：It is required by one university in Zhengzhou that students should clean the campus every morning to achieve class credits．Opinions on the practice vary widely from person to person．(30)I am strongly opposed to the practice for the following reasons．First of all，cleaning tends to take up too much time，which becomes a distraction for students and discourages them from focusing on their academic performances．Then，students can be encouraged to maintain clean living areas but it’s unreasonable to relate the cleaning with the academic credits．As students，they should put more efforts into their studies to achieve class credits instead of sweeping the campus．Furthermore，though someone claims labor can contribute to developing the spirit of hard work，it should by no means be achieved through daily floor sweeping．In conclusion，there is no sense in students sweeping the campus，for it benefits neither their character nor study．

【解析】这是一篇立场选择型作文写作。动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。