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【题目】假定你是李华,校学生会主席。即将高中毕业,你代表全体高三学生邀请外教Jeff来参加毕业典礼。

1.时间:6月6日 上午9:00; 地点:学校音乐厅;

2.介绍毕业典礼的活动;

3.希望Jeff能够发表简短的演讲。

注意:

1.词数80左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Jeff,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jeff,

I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union, writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony.

The ceremony is to be held in the school Music Hall at 9:00 am, on June 6th. It will start with the School Anthem(校歌), which is followed by various performances raging from dances to martial arts. Moreover, videos made by students themselves will bring the vivid recollections of past school life into visual reality. Should our graduation ceremony ended up with your speech, it would do us a great honor.

Please reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章主题和内容要点已经给出,但需要考生在写作时,合理发挥想象力,做到有话可说,使文章的表达自然,丰满。

注意以下几点:1.通篇以一般将来时为主。2不能简单罗列要点,注意使用恰当的连接词,使行文连贯。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句型,以提高文章的档次。4. 注意字数:80字左右。5.规范誊写,使卷面整洁。

此外,应注意除了题干中给出的三条要点,在信的开头应点明写信背景,即题干中隐含的信息:假定你是李华,校学生会主席。即将高中毕业,你代表全体高三学生邀请外教Jeff来参加毕业典礼。从而点明来信目的;最后也要有结尾,如:盼尽快回复等。

【范文亮点】

It will start with the School Anthem(校歌), which is followed by various performances raging from dances to martial arts.使用了定语从句以及动词现在分词作后置定语,即非谓语动词的用法。

Moreover, videos made by students themselves will bring the vivid recollections of past school life into visual reality.使用了动词过去分词作后置定语。

Should our graduation ceremony by ended with your speech, it would do us a great honor.使用了虚拟语气,同时do sb. an honor(是某人的荣幸)用得也不错。

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【题目】请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Lang Lang is a worldclass pianist who grew up in Shenyang. He went to a piano school in Beijing when he was just eight. “You need fortune,” his father said. “But unless you work hard, no fortune will come.”

What made Lang Lang sad was that his piano teacher in Beijing didn’t like him. “You have no talent. You will never be a pianist.” As an eightyearold boy, Lang Lang was badly hurt. For the next two weeks he didn’t touch the piano. Wisely, his father didn’t push him, but waited.

Luckily, the day came when his teacher asked him to play some holiday songs. At first, he didn’t want to, but as he placed his fingers on the piano keys, he realized he could show other people that he had the ability to do it well. That day he told his father that he wanted to study with a new teacher. From then on, everything got turned around. He started winning competitions. Soon it was clear that he couldn’t stay in China forever—he had to play on the world’s big stages. In 1997 Lang Lang moved again, this time to Philadelphia, the US.

There he spent two years practicing and by 1999 he had worked hard enough for fortune to take over. After his successful performance at Chicago’s Raviniu Festival, concerts in Lincoln Center and Carnegie Hall started pouring in. Lang Lang finally worked to reach the place where fortune spots him and lets him shine.

写作内容

1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;

2.用约120个单词就成功”谈谈你的看法,内容包括:

(1)你认为获得成功的因素有哪些?

(2)简述坚持(persistence)对于成功的意义;

(3)举例说明坚持对你或你的同学的积极影响。

写作要求

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3.不必写标题。

评分标准

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

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【题目】Everyone, please imagine, a big explosion breaks out as the plane takes us high in the sky. The plane is full of smoke and the engine sounds scary. Two minutes later, the engines are turned off. We are now sitting in a plane with no sound. And we can see: Life is over.

That really happened. In January 2009, I had a front-row seat on Flight 1549, the plane that crash-landed in the Hudson River in New York.

Now let me tell you the three things I learned when the silence came.

First, I thought about all the people I wanted to reach out to but didn’t. I thought about all the experiences I wanted to have but never did. I no longer wanted to put off anything in life. Second, I really regretted the time I wasted on things that did not matter. I decided to remove negative energy from my life. Third, I realized, wow, dying was not scary. But it was very sad just because I only wished I could have seen my kids grow up.

Fortunately, I was given the gift of a miracle of not dying that day. I was given another gift, with which I was to see into the future and come back and live differently.

About a month later, my wife and I were at a performance by my daughter, not much artistic talent. Yet, I’m crying. I realized that above all, the only goal in my life was to be a good father.

Audience, again, imagine the same thing happening on your plane. How would you change? What would you get done? And more than anything, are you being the best parent you can?

Thank you.

1Which of the following can be the best title for the text?

A. Air crash is always a tragedy.

B. What I learned from the air crash.

C. Life is a miracle as we imagine.

D. How to become a good father.

2When does the idea “Life is over” come into being?

A. Exactly during the explosion.

B. When the plane was full of smoke.

C. Before the engines sounded scary.

D. When the engines were turned off.

3What is the author’s final goal in life?

A. Never to put off anything in life.

B. To remove negative energy from life.

C. To see his daughter grow up.

D. To be a good father.

4What type of writing is this text?

A. A speech on one’s air travel experience.

B. An emergency crash-landing guide.

C. An introduction of an adventure novel.

D. A safety training for air passengers.

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