Question

13．请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章．
When we read newspapers，we often come across such English words as"AIDS"and"PK．"When we watch TV，we frequently hear words like"NBA"or"PM2.5．"When we speak，we automatically use words like"OUT"or"Bye-bye．"English words and expressions like these are getting popular．They have already become part of our daily language．And 239English words have been included in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese．
The inclusion has started a heated discussion．A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint over the inclusion of these English words，which，they think，goes against Chinese language policies．They not only worry that Chinese is borrowing an increasing number of English words but are also concerned that the inclusion may hurt the dignity of the Chinese language．However，others are in favor of the inclusion because it is hard to say whether it will threaten the Chinese language．They believe the selection is mostly a result of their function and use in daily life．
[写作内容]
1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2．用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：
（1）支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇；
（2）用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点．
[写作要求]
1．可以支持文中任一观点，但必须提供理由或论据；
2．阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句；
3．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4．不必写标题．
[评分标准]
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：find one's way（渗入到…），in favor of（支持…），on the rise （上升），on some occasions（在一些场合），instead of（代替），borrow sth from…（从…借…），stop doing sth（停止做某事），facilitate daily communication（促进日常交流），sooner or later （迟早），Chinese tones（声调）．take…for granted （把…当成理所当然）．
【高分句型一】
1．it's not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts．
此处是由"it"引导的主语从句，"it"作形式主语，结构为"It+be+形容词+for sb to do sth"．
【高分句型二】
In English，there are many words borrowed from Latin，French，or even Chinese．
此处是由过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰名词"words"，可以理解为定语从句"which/that are borrowed from Latin"．
【高分句型三】
2．①it's safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English ②which facilitates daily communication．
①此处是由"it"引导的主语从句，"it"作形式主语，结构为"It+be+形容词+for sb to do sth"．
②此处是由关系代词"which"引导的定语从句，先行词为"English"，"which"在从句中作主语．

解答 支持：
Today，more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language．Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese includes 239 English words．Some people support it while others do not．（概括）
Generally，I am in favor of the inclusion．As the number of English learners is on the rise，it's not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts．【高分句型一】Besides，it is，on some occasions，more convenient to use English words．Most people nowadays use"IT"instead of its translation"xinxi jishu"．In our global village，we can see that it's not uncommon for one language to borrow words from other languages．In English，there are many words borrowed from Latin，French，or even Chinese．【高分句型二】In fact，Chinese has never stopped taking words from other languages，say，"ganbu"or"minzhu"from Japanese．（支持汉语词典收录英语词汇原因）
So，it's safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communication．【高分句型三】（个人观点）

反对：
With English words getting popular in both media and daily life，a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them，leaving the public divided into two opposing groups："For"and"Against．"I tend to take the"Against"side for two reasons．Firstly，this inclusion has actually polluted our mother tongue．Sooner or later，many English accents will rise and fall with the four Chinese tones．And，rules don't tell us how to pronounce such English-turned Chinese words as"wifi"and"Out"in a Chinese way!Secondly，such an inclusion may give rise to prejudices of the educated against those with little knowledge of English．Just for one illustration，while college students take"Bye-bye"for granted when parting from each other，it may unconsciously hurt the feelings of someone who is used to"zaijian．"In short，not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese，it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people．

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．