Question

【题目】现在许多年轻人都热衷于过诸如“情人节”“愚人节”“圣诞节”之类的洋节，但也有许多人对此持反对态度。请结合下表内容谈谈你的看法。

支持者的看法	反对者的看法	你的看法
1.显得时尚 2. 可以学习外国文化 3．借此扩大交际圈	1.显得愚蠢 2．是一种文化侵略 3. 会淡化对传统节日的感情	……

注意：

1．文章必须包括表中的全部内容。

2．词数：120左右。文章开头已写好，不计入总词数。

3．参考词汇：侵略— invasion，传统的— traditional

Is it right for young people to celebrate foreign festivals such as Valentine's Day, April Fool's Day and Christmas Day?

Answer 1

【答案】

Is it right for young people to celebrate foreign festivals such as Valentine's Day, April Fool's Day and Christmas Day? Some people say yes. They think that celebrating foreign festivals is a fashionable activity. They help people not only to make more friends but also to gain more knowledge about foreign culture. Others, however, think not. They say that it's foolish for Chinese people to celebrate foreign festivals, which will greatly affect people's feelings on our own traditional festivals. Some people even consider it as a cultural invasion.

As for me, I don't think that foreign festivals are very bad things. In fact, the world is becoming “smaller” — people all over the world are living in a big family. On the other hand, I also think that we should pay more attention to our own traditional festivals，because they are part of the root of our Chinese culture.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于观点类说明文，根据提示信息和图表说明来介绍小区的具体情况。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、分析文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象，要依据提示情景或词语来行文。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Is it right for young people to celebrate foreign festivals such as Valentine's Day, April Fool's Day and Christmas Day?疑问句开头，吸引读者的注意且发人深思。They think that celebrating foreign festivals is a fashionable activity.和 They say that it's foolish for Chinese people to celebrate foreign festivals是宾语从句，还有定语从句which will greatly affect people's feelings on our own traditional festivals.和原因状语从句because they are part of the root of our Chinese culture.等。此外，文章还使用了大量短语such as, gain more knowledge , As for me , In fact, all over the world, live in, not only…but also.., pay more attention to, be part of, the root of等。插入语On the other hand，以及副词however的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。