题目内容
【题目】作文
随着科技的进步,多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休息时,有些学校利用它来播放音乐。假如昨天你班就“课间是否要播放音乐”展开了讨论。请你根据以下信息用英语写一篇短文,陈述讨论结果。
[写作内容]
1.讨论的时间和讨论的问题; 2.学生们的观点: 大多数学生认为:活跃气氛,放松,带来快乐,学习效率高。 部分学生认为:时间短,没效果;课间太吵,需要安静。 3.达成的共识:最好播放柔和并适合于中学生的音乐。 |
参考词汇:the class break, efficiency(效率), relaxation(放松), agreement(共识)
[写作要求] 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯:
【答案】
Yesterday we had a discussion about whether music should be played during the class break or not. Towards this, most of the students think that music should be played for it can produce a better efficiency and greater relaxation as well as a lively and happy atmosphere. However, some believe they can't get the expected effect from playing music, for the class break time is short. What is needed most during the class break is peace rather than the noise produced by music. After a heated discussion, we finally reached an agreement that it' s better to play soft music, which is suitable for our middle school students as well.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是写一篇议论文,关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,本文的主题是课间是否要播放音乐,考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系。灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
学生写作要有灵活性,同时要表现出较好的英语语言表达能力。文章使用了很好的短语和句子:whether... or not是否, most of 大部分,as well as 同时,也,However 然而,What is needed most最需要的是, during 当,rather than After a heated discussion经过激烈的讨论, reached an agreement达成共识, it' s better to做...更好。most of the students think that music should be played是宾语从句,Yesterday we had a discussion about whether music should be played during the class break or not. which is suitable for our middle school students as well.是定语从句,What is needed most during the class break is peace rather than the noise produced by music.是主语从句。music should be played for it can produce a better efficiency and greater relaxation as well as a lively and happy atmosphere. 此句式为文章增色,显得文章很有档次。