Question

7．请根据下面提示，写一篇短文．词数不少于50．
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim． Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so．
提示词：saw v．锯，n．锯子

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文，让我们谈谈自己对图画的了解以及怎么看待此问题的，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：描述图片内容； 自己的看法．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为描述图片内容．第二部分为由图中人物联想到我们自己的行为．
重点短语与句型：
cut off 切断…
make a decision做决定
make it成功
 take…into consideration考虑
高分句型一：However，he ignores the fact that he himself is sitting on the branch．此句用了that引导同位语从句．
高分句型二：Similarly，we often need to take a closer and more comprehensive look at what we are doing此句what引导名词性从句．

解答 As is shown in the picture，the man is trying to cut off a brance．However，he ignores the fact that he himself is sitting on the branch（高分句型一）．Once he makes it，he is sure to fall off together with the brance and get hurt．If the man took this into consideration，he would easily find a solution，for example，using a ladder as an aid．Thus he wouldn't risk the danger at all．The devil is in the detail．（描述图片内容）
I think the picture is reminding us that it is important to consider possible results before making a decision．Similarly，we often need to take a closer and more comprehensive look at what we are doing（高分句型二）．If we keep that in mind，we are more likely to stay away from dangers and achieve our goals．（由图中人物联想到我们自己的行为）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．