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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I go on a group walking holiday in the capital of my province last year. The activity, which lasted for two days, were great, and I made much good friends. However, we were from different cities, so it would be difficulty for us to meet each other very often. On my way home, I started talking to the girl next me, who also took part in the holiday. I found I had so much in the common with her and I decided to go back together next year. This activity not only helped me improve my health, but also helped me meet different peoples. I would like to taking part in other similar activities on the future.

Answer 1

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【解析】这篇短文讲述的是在我参加集体散步时和一个女孩聊天，发现这项活动不仅可以锻炼身体还可以交朋友。

1.根据语境及短文时态可知，本句应该用一般过去时态，go的过去式为went。故把go改为went.

2.last持续，该句表示“持续两天”，last为及物动词，故把for省去。

3.句子主语是the activity，是名词单数，谓语用was.故把were改为was.

4. much修饰的是不可数名词，该处修饰可数名词friends，应该用many修饰。故把much改为many.

5.该处作be的表语，用形容词作表语。故把difficultly改为different.

6.next to是固定短语，译为“紧挨着”。故加上to.

7.根据句意“我发现我和她有很多共同之处，并且我们决定第二年一起回去。”可知是我们决定。故把I改为we.

8.people在句中表示人们，peoples表示人民，该句中表示不同的人。故把peoples改为people.

9.would like to do译为“愿意做某事”，是固定搭配。故把taking改为take.

10.in the future译为“今后，将来”，是固定搭配。故把on改为in.