Question

【题目】请以“One Thing I'm Proud of”为题，用英语写一篇100－120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：

1.记述事情经过；

2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。

注意：文章的标题已给出(不计词数)。

One Thing I'm Proud of

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Answer 1

【答案】

One Thing I'm Proud of

I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.

The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skilful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.

I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realise that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb“Practice makes perfect.”

【解析】

试题分析：本题考查记叙文的写作，记一件令自己骄傲的事，记叙+议论型作文，命题开放性作文。高考英语写作的要求在高考英语写作阅卷的评分标准中的其中有几点是十分值得我们关注的，这么几点提示十分重要： 1 丰富的词汇和较多的语法结构的运用；2 高级的词汇和语法的使用； 3 连词的使用 ；4 切题，且完成题目中提示内容。

【亮点说明】这篇范文围绕主题，根据提示要点展开层次清楚，用词丰富，运用较多的语法结构，高级的句型有：The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. 这是连词the first day，Amazed at how skilful they were, I was determined to be just as good.这里使用过去分词，Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. 这里使用了不定式，I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realise that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. 这里使用原因状语从句和宾语从句，还使用了谚语：Practice makes perfect.”