Question

你是李华，向Teenagers杂志Conversation With Broad 栏目的负责人Brand写了一封信，向他叙述与父母的一次冲突，并请求他们的建议。请根据下图完成该信。

注意：

可适当增加细节。

词数120字左右。信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Answer 1

Dear Brand,

I’m a student from Xinhua Senior High School. Last Sunday, after leaving school, I went home extremely tired. I wanted to have a good rest and relax myself. Before my parents could say hello to me, I went straight to my own bedroom. Though my parents were very confused, they didn't ask me why and continued cooking.

Upon entering the room, I turned on the tape recorder on its full volume. I was lost in loud music when my mother rushed into my room angrily, saying “do you have to turn up your music so loud? ” I was supposed to say sorry to him. But why didn’t they ask me what happened instead of shouting at me ? I feel so lonely. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文叙述的是李华与家人的一次冲突，因为叙述的是过去的事情，所以使用一般过去时和第一人称。首先要审要点：1.李华回到家，感觉很累；就打开音乐听，想好好休息；2.父母亲回家感到很困惑，但是仍然继续做法。3.我把声音调到最大，妈妈冲进房间指责我。我感觉很委屈。

看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；

亮点说明：范文里谋篇布局的安排很好，显得文章很流利。另外非谓语动词的使用很好，如：I was lost

in loud music when my mother rushed into my room angrily, saying “do you have to turn up your music so loud? ”中的saying就是过去分词做状语用法。

考点：考查看图作文