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5．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 不久前参加了他们学校的汉语学习小组．由于感觉学习起来困难很大，他打算退出．请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封信．内容包括：
1．劝他不要放弃；
2．给他一些学习汉语的建议．
注意：1、词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you have joined the Chinese Learning Group in your school．It is common that you will have difficulty in learning Chinese at first．（高分句型一）I hope you won't give up．
Learning Chinese well will be very important and useful for you．It can help you learn more about Chinese history and culture．Moreover，it can help you communicate with Chinese people better．To learn Chinese well，you need to practice speaking it as often as possible，especially with native speakers．（高分句型二）In addition，listening to Chinese songs or learning to sing them is a good way to memorize Chinese words．（高分句型三）Why not have a try？If there is anything I can do to help you，do tell me．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 不久前参加了他们学校的汉语学习小组．由于感觉学习起来困难很大，他打算退出．请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：劝他不要放弃；给他一些学习汉语的建议．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：have difficulty in 在做某事方面有困难；give up放弃；Moreover而且；communicate with沟通，交流；In addition另外；
It is common that you will have difficulty in learning Chinese at first．（高分句型一）
To learn Chinese well，you need to practice speaking it as often as possible，especially with native speakers．（高分句型二）
In addition，listening to Chinese songs or learning to sing them is a good way to memorize Chinese words．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       I'm glad to hear that you have joined the Chinese Learning Group in your school． It is common that you will have difficulty in learning Chinese at first．（高分句型一）I hope you won't give up．
       Learning Chinese well will be very important and useful for you．It can help you learn more about Chinese history and culture．Moreover，it can help you communicate with Chinese people better．To learn Chinese well，you need to practice speaking it as often as possible，especially with native speakers．（高分句型二）In addition，listening to Chinese songs or learning to sing them is a good way to memorize Chinese words．（高分句型三）Why not have a try？If there is anything I can do to help you，do tell me．
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                      Li hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．