题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的朋友Molly写信向你询问如何保护视力。请你给她写一封信,并提出一些建议,内容包括:
1.用眼时间不能过长;
2.读书时眼睛与书应该保持一英尺左右的距离;
3.坚持每天做眼保健操;
注意:1.词数100左右
2.信的格式已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 昏暗的dim 视力eyesight
Dear Molly,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Molly,
You asked me how to protect your eyesight in your last letter. I’m writing to give you some advice.
First, you should not keep your eyes working for a long time. After you have studied for an hour or so, you'd better have a rest and look out of the window. Second, you should keep your book about a foot away from your eyes. Third, keep it in mind that you shouldn't read in dim light, in the strong sunlight, on the moving bus or in bed. Lastly, doing eye exercises every day helps you protect your eyesight.
I hope my advice will be of help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:
题干给出背景:你的朋友Molly写信向你询问如何保护视力,文章要求你给她写一封信,提出一些建议。成文时应注意以下几点:(1)内容要点齐全。提纲中给的三点建议表达全面,另外可以加上一两条自己的建议。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态:一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点,列出提纲:第一部分:写作背景(你来信询问如何保护视力);第二段:提出建议(用First, Second, Third 以及Lastly使这部分流畅);第三部分:结束语(给他鼓励)。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:时间状语从句的使用After you have studied for an hour or so, you'd better have a rest and look out of the window.;动名词做主语Lastly, doing eye exercises every day helps you protect your eyesight.;宾语从句的使用I hope my advice will be of help to you.。2.使用了过渡词语:First, Second, Third ,Lastly等。3.使用了重要短语:had better最好;keep away from避开,使不接近;keep it in mind记住。
