Question

12．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My dream school starts at 8：30 a．m and ends at 3：30 p．m．They are three  lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon．We didn't need to do so many homework．Therefore，we have more time with after-school activities．For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day．
My dream school look like a big garden．There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings．We can lie on the grass for a rest，sat by the lake listening music．The teachers here are kind and helpfully．They are not only our teachers but also our friends．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中描述了自己理想的学校的情况，学习负担很轻，没有作业；环境很美，像个花园；老师和蔼，跟朋友一样．

解答 My dream school starts at 8：30 a．m and ends at 3：30 p．m．They are three  lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon．We didn'tneed to do so many homework．Therefore，we have more time with after-school activities．For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day．
My dream school look like a big garden．There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings．We can lie on the grass for a rest，sat by the lake listening∧music．The teachers here are kind and helpfully．They are not only our teachers but also our friends．
详解：
1．they改为there；考查固定句型，这里应该用there be句型，表示"我们早上有三节课"．故They应改为There．
2．didn't改为don't；考查时态．本文通篇时态都是一般现在时，主语是复数．故用don't．
3．many改为much；考查近义词辨析，homework是不可数名词，要用much修饰．many修饰可数名词的复数形式，故将many改为much．
4．with改为for；考查介词搭配．句意：我们有做…的时间．这里介词for表示目的．
5．hour改成hours；考查名词的复数形式．句子中的one and a half意思是"一个半"，后面的名词必定是复数，故用hours．
6．look改成looks；考查主谓一致．主语是my dream school，是第三人称单数，谓语用单数形式，而且这篇文章使用一般现在时，故用looks．
7．去掉the；考查冠词．可数名词复数前通常不用冠词，表示泛指．所以这里flowers和trees均为泛指，不用冠词，去掉the．
8．sat改为sit；考查动词的时态，本文时态为一般现在时，故将sat改为sit，与前面的lie构成并列成分，意为"我们可以躺在草地上休息一会儿，坐在湖边听音乐"．
9．listening后面加to；考查动词，listen为不及物动词，不能直接跟宾语，和介词to搭配，故listening后面加to．
10．helpfully改为helpful；考查形容词． 由连词and连接的两个词，其形式应该是一致的．由are kind得知应该是系表结构，故helpfully改为helpful．

点评 在这篇短文改错当中，首先要从整体掌握短文大意，结合上下文语境并充分运用平时掌握的基础知识，习惯用法，短语搭配等对短文进行分析，以便找出文中的错误所在．