Question

【题目】书面表达

近日，我国全面放开二胎政策。就人们关于二胎政策的看法，你在许多同学中做了一个调查。请按以下要点写一篇调查报告。

1. 不同的人持不同的观点。55%左右的人支持，45%左右的人反对。

2. 支持方的理由。

3. 反对方的理由。

4. 你的观点及理由。

注意：1. 词数100左右。开头部分已写好，不计入总词数。

2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

Recently, two-child policy was put into effect in China

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, two-child policy was put into effect in China，on which I made a survey among a group of students. Their views on it vary from person to person.

About fifty-five percent of the students surveyed hold the view that our country is in urgent need of the new policy. The reasons are chiefly as follows. For one thing, two-child policy contributes to easing pressure from the aging population. For another, it helps to relieve our burden when our parents grow old.

Others are against it. In their eyes, first, it costs too much to bring up two children, which many families can not afford. Second, it will be more difficult to find a job in the future, if there are so many people in China.

As far as I am concerned, I really want to have a little brother. Only in that way, can I learn to share and become less selfish.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于议论文。以当下热门话题，二胎政策为话题，展开的正反面观点的讨论。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如two-child policy was put into effect in China，on which I made a survey among a group of students为非限定定语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语vary from person to person, in urgent need of等短语。副词 For another的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。