Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighter will come and put out a fire. If it’s false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.

Answer 1

【答案】1.with改为about

2. go改为goes

3. wait后加for

4. classmate改为classmates

5. tring改为try

6. calmly 改为calm

7. a改为the

8. us改为you

9.when去掉

10.and 改为or

【解析】

【1】with 改为about 固定结构：“和某人谈论某事”：talk to/with sb about sb/sth

【2】go改为goes 谓语的数:该句主语为a fire alarm ，谓语为一般现在时，所以谓语改为goes

【3】wait后加for 动词的用法：wait为vi.，加宾语时要加prep. for

【4】classmate改为classmates 名词的数：classmate为可数名词，此处又为复数意义，所以改为classmates

【5】trying改为try 此处为and连接的并列谓语故把trying改为try

【6】calmly改为calm 因为remain作“仍然是…，保持…不变”时为系动词，所以其后接形容词。

【7】a fire 中的a改为“the Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. ”该处的火灾，已在上文中被提到了，故此处为特指，所以用定冠词the

【8】us改为you 根据上下文的逻辑关系。整篇文章都是以“我”的口吻，告诉“你”该怎么做，所以要把此处的us改为you

【9】去掉when，文中if引导的状语从句中，谓语notice后的宾语从句 someone is missing and hurt句意完整、结构完整，所以只需要连接词that

【10】and改为or，此处missing和hurt为选择关系，所以把and改为or，翻译成“或是”