Question

15．假定你是李华，你班同学进行了一场关于"公交车上是否该让座？"主题的大讨论．一些人认为不应该让座；另一些人认为这是一种好行为．请你用英语给某英语报社写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍讨论情况，并谈谈自己的做法和看法．
Dear editor，
Recently my classmates had a heated discussion about whether we should offer seats on bus or not．
Some students are against offering seats on bus．The reason they hold is that all passengers have equal rights to have their own seats，especially when they are tired．The old and disabled should own separate buses specially provided for them．On the other hand，the others are in favor of it．They think it is a good deed．
As for me，I always offer my seat to women who are pregnant or holding a baby．I also offer my seat to the senior citizens．Actually，I offer my seat to whoever really needs it．In my opinion，I think offering seats on bus，a small act though，is a symbol of kindness and the level of our civilization．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
The reason they hold is that all passengers have equal rights to have their own seats，especially when they are tired
他们认为的原因是，所有乘客都已经有了自己的座位上的平等权利，尤其是当他们累了．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，I think offering seats on bus，a small act though，is a symbol of kindness and the level of our civilization．
在我看来，我认为在公共汽车上提供的座位，虽然一个小小的行动，但是象征着善良和我们的文明水平．

解答 Dear editor，
Recently my classmates had a heated discussion about whether we should offer seat on bus or not．Some students are against offering seats on bus．The reason they hold is that all passengers have equal rights to have their own seats，especially when they are tired（高分句型一）．The old and disabled should own separate buses specially provided for them．On the other hand，the others are in favor of it．They think it is a good deed．
As for me，I always offer my seat to women who are pregnant or holding a baby．I also offer my seat to the senior citizens．Actually，I offer my seat to whoever really needs it．In my opinion，I think offering seats on bus，a small act though，is a symbol of kindness and the level of our civilization（高分句型二）．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．