题目内容
20.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分.
Peter Judd joined in the army when he was eighteen,and for several months he was teaching how to be a good soldier.He did quite well in everything besides shooting.One day he and his friends were practising their shooting,and both all of them were doing quite well except Peter.After he has shot at the target nine times and had not hit it once,the officer was trying to teach the young soldiers to shoot said,"You're quite hopeless.Peter!Don't waste your last bullet,too!Go behind that wall and shoot you with it!Peter felt ashamed.He went behind the wall,and a few seconds late,the officer and the other soldiers heard the sound of a shot.But Peter was all right."I'm sorry,sir."He said,"and I missed again."
分析 本文主要讲述Peter Judd参军后,在几个月的新兵训练中除了射击外,其它都做得很好.一天,他和几个朋友练习射击,除了Peter Judd外,其他人都做得很好.他的军官让他不要射击了,用最后一粒子弹射击自己.几秒钟后,军官和其他的士兵听到了射击声,但Peter Judd好好的,他说:"对不起,我又错过了."
解答 Peter Judd joined in the army when he was eighteen,and for several months he was teaching how to be a good soldier.He did quite well in everything besides shooting.One day he and his friends were practising their shooting,and both all of them were doing quite well except Peter.After he has shot at the target nine times and had not hit it once,the officer∧was trying to teach the young soldiers to shoot said,"You're quite hopeless.Peter!Don't waste your last bullet,too!Go behind that wall and shoot you with it!Peter felt ashamed.He went behind the wall,and a few seconds late,the officer and the other soldiers heard the sound of a shot.But Peter was all right."I'm sorry,sir."He said,"and I missed again."
详解:
1.去掉in 考查词语用法."参军"要用join the army,in是多余的,要去掉.
2.teaching改为taught 考查动词语态.he与teach之间是动宾关系,用一般过去时的被动语态.
3.besides改为except 考查介词.besides意为"除了..还有…",except"除了..之外",此处应是后者.
4.去掉both 考查代词."所有人"为all of them,both为多余的,要去掉.
5.has改为had 考查动词时态.and是并列连词,它前后连接两个相同的语法成分,had shot和had not hit都用过去完成时态.
6.加who/that 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词the officer在从句中作主语,用关系代词who/that.
7.too改为either 考查词语用法.否定句中表达"也",要用either,too用于肯定句中.
8.you改为yourself 考查代词.根据句意:射死自己.用反身代词yourself.
9.late改为later 考查副词.later用于一段具体时间之后,表示从过去或将来算起的多长时间以后,但通常不指从现在算起的多久以后.
10.and改为but 考查连词.前后两个分句之间表示转折关系而非并列关系,用连词but.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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