Question

19．如何理解"成功"，不同的人有不同的看法．请认真阅读下面的引语（ quotation），按要求用英语写一篇短文．
"Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm．"
-Sir Winston，Churchill
内容要求：
1）你对该引语的理解：
2）你的相关经历：
3）恰当的结尾．
注意：
1）短文开头已给出，不计人总词数：
2）文中不能出现考生的具体信息：
3）词数：120左右．
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that     ．

Answer 1

分析 本文写作话题是"成功"，根据所给材料"丘吉尔有关成功的名言"阐述观点，发表看法，并结合自己的经历，属于提纲作文．在写作时以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主．重要短语：get discouraged （气馁），consists in（在于），can't wait to（迫不及待地做…..），lost heart（气馁，丧失信心），stick to（坚持），look back（回顾），succeed in（成功做…）．

解答 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures．Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm．Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures．（理解）
     At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift．So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it．【高分句型】However，it was harder than expected．The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control．Worse still，I took many falls off the bike．I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going．【高分句型】With more practice，I did better and better．Looking back，I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart．【高分句型】（经历）
    Actually，we can't succeed in everything we try．What's important is that we should stick to it．【高分句型】（总结）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．