题目内容
15.下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;
2.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Some say small talk is useless conversation lacked meaning and value.Meanwhile,there is nothing small about small talk.Simple although it is,small talk makes it possibly for us to start friendships with strangers.To master this skill,you should first realize that a friendly greeting plays important part in successful small talk.Remember to smile when you come across with someone you knew.Start a conversation by saying something fun but positive.During the conversation,keep listening carefully to find some interesting topic which may appear in the speaker's words.If you have to go,make sure you say goodbye genuinely to avoid make the person embarrassed.
分析 本文主要介绍小谈话在和陌生人开始友谊时也是很重要的,以及在谈话过程中一些需要注意的问题.比如:谈话中要微笑,仔细地倾听等.
解答 Some say small talk is useless conversation lacked meaning and value.Meanwhile,there is nothing small about small talk.Simple although it is,small talk makes it possibly for us to start friendships with strangers.To master this skill,you should first realize that a friendly greeting plays∧important part in successful small talk.Remember to smile when you come across with someone you knew.Start a conversation by saying something fun but positive.During the conversation,keep listening carefully to find some interesting topic which may appear in the speaker's words.If you have to go,make sure you say goodbye genuinely to avoid make the person embarrassed.
详解:
1.lacked改为lacking 考查现在分词.conversation与lack之间是主谓关系,用现在分词短语lacking meaning and value作后置定语.
2.Meanwhile改为However 考查副词.however表示转折,尤其用于谈及一个既成事实时,表示转折,其意为"可是""仍然"等.可放在句首、句中或句末,通常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开.
3.although改为though/as 考查连词.as引导让步状语从句时,as意为"虽然…但是","纵使…"之意","尽管",通常从句要倒装,倒装的方法是将从句的表语或状语放在as之前,though也可用于这样的结构中.但although不可以这样用,即不用倒装句中.
4.possibly改为possible 考查固定句型.在句型make it adj.中,要用形容词作宾语补足语.
5.加an 考查冠词.play an important part in意为"在…中起重要作用",是固定搭配.
6.去掉with 考查词语用法.come across意为"偶然遇见",是及物动词短语,后接宾语时不需要带介词with.
7.knew改为know 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是一般事实,用一般现在时态.
8.but改为and 考查连词.fun和positive之间是并列关系,而非转折关系,用连词and.
9.topic改为topics 考查名词复数.topic意为"话题",不止一个话题,用复数形式.
10.make改为making 考查动名词.avoid后接动词时用动名词形式.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
A. | remaining | B. | leaving | C. | to go | D. | remained |