Question

15．下面这幅图片展现了女儿为妈妈洗脚的情景．请根据你对这幅图片的理解用英语写一篇短文．
你的短文应包含以下内容：
1．描述图片内容；如情景、人物、动作等等；
2．结合自身实际；谈谈你的感想；
3．举例说明你该怎样孝敬父母．
注意：1．不要做简单描述，可参照下面文章开头所给提示，发挥想象；
2．词数100左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
Respecting the elderly is the virtue of our country．The picture shows us a moving moment when a mother is washing her mother's feet，with her daughter helping out with a fan in her hand．（高分句型一）
All this reminds me of my mother，a general worker，who has a heavy burden of household and work．（高分句型二）But she still has much concern for me．On the contrary，I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels，always thinking what I could do in return is studying．（高分句型三）
Now I can help with the everyday washing，bedroom cleaning，or at least prepare breakfast myself，so as to share my mother's daily burden．Meanwhile，I think the best way to show respect and kindness to parents is to finish the task of study well and remember to care about our parents as well．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息下面这幅图片展现了女儿为妈妈洗脚的情景．请根据你对这幅图片的理解用英语写一篇短文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：描述图片内容；如情景、人物、动作等等；结合自身实际；谈谈你的感想；举例说明你该怎样孝敬父母．
2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：remind sb of sth使某人想起某事；On the contrary相反的是；pay attention to关注；in return作为回报；at least至少；Meanwhile同时；care about关心；
The picture shows us a moving moment when a mother is washing her mother's feet，with her daughter helping out with a fan in her hand．（高分句型一）
  All this reminds me of my mother，a general worker，who has a heavy burden of household and work．（高分句型二）
But she still has much concern for me．On the contrary，I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels，always thinking what I could do in return is studying．（高分句型三）

解答 Respecting the elderly is the virtue of our country．The picture shows us a moving moment when a mother is washing her mother's feet，with her daughter helping out with a fan in her hand．（高分句型一）
      All this reminds me of my mother，a general worker，who has a heavy burden of household and work．（高分句型二）But she still has much concern for me．On the contrary，I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels，always thinking what I could do in return is studying．（高分句型三）
      Now I can help with the everyday washing，bedroom cleaning，or at least prepare breakfast myself，so as to share my mother's daily burden．Meanwhile，I think the best way to show respect and kindness to parents is to finish the task of study well and remember to care about our parents as well．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．