题目内容
17.假如你叫李华.你的美国笔友Simon发来电子邮件,告诉你他和他的家人七月来北京体验中国传统文化,请为他安排北京一日游活动.请回复邮件,告诉他你的活动安排并解释安排的理由.注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息 假如你叫李华.你的美国笔友Simon发来电子邮件,告诉你他和他的家人七月来北京体验中国传统文化,请为他安排北京一日游活动.请回复邮件.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:告诉他你的活动安排并解释安排的理由 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:with delight 高兴地 First首先;Second其次;take a walk散步;Look forward to盼望;
Having learned with delight that you are coming to Beijing for a visit this July,I'm writing to offer my suggestions concerning your one-day trip in Beijing,which I hope will be to your liking.(高分句型一)
First,it is a good choice to visit the Palace Museum in the morning which helps you to learn more about Chinese history and architect since all the buildings were built in traditional Chinese style.(高分句型二)
Second,you can't afford to miss a tour of the hutong in the afternoon,where you can enter a Siheyuan and experience the life of the locals.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Simon,
Having learned with delight that you are coming to Beijing for a visit this July,I'm writing to offer my suggestions concerning your one-day trip in Beijing,which I hope will be to your liking.(高分句型一)
First,it is a good choice to visit the Palace Museum in the morning which helps you to learn more about Chinese history and architect since all the buildings were built in traditional Chinese style.(高分句型二)Second,you can't afford to miss a tour of the hutong in the afternoon,where you can enter a Siheyuan and experience the life of the locals.(高分句型三)In the evening,it can't be better to take a walk in the Tiananmen Square because it is the largest square in the world and attracts millions of tourists every year.
I hope you'll enjoy an unforgettable experience in Beijing.Look forward to your coming.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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