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1．最近，"到底该不该为老年人让座"的问题在网络上被热烈讨论．很多人认为"让座只是美德，不是义务"．高二•九班的同学也对此进行了一场讨论．请你写一篇评论稿投给校刊，描述一下讨论的情况，并表达自己的观点．不用逐句翻译，可以适当发挥．字数150字左右，开头已经给出．

支持让座	1．让座是中华民族传统美德． 2．我们都会老，都需要帮助，要换位思考．   3．让座也是文明行为，帮助别人也让自己快乐．
反面的意见	1．老年人不应该在年轻人上下班时去坐公交车． 2．年轻人每天工作累，压力大，也会生病． 3．有些老年人认为年轻人让座是理所当然，让人不愉快．

【提示】：让座：give one's seat to…；     传统美德：traditional virtue；
文明的 civilized；      认为…理所当然  take…for granted
Recently，whether the young should give their seats to the old on buses is being discussed on the internet．We classmates had a class meeting to discuss the topic．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一个表格式的作文，根据表格提供的内容文章可写成三段式．第一段分析支持让座的原因，第二段分析不支持让座的原因，第三段针对以上内容阐明自己的观点．要把表格中的要点信心扩展成一个个完整的句子，然后根据文章的中心话题和要求，把这些要点连句成文．同时注意上下文的衔接，灵活使用过渡词以及各种句型，长短句结合，搭配适当的过渡词使文章衔接自然．
亮点句型一：Furthermore，some old people take it for granted that it's the young's duty to give seats to them，which makes them unpleasant．此外，有些老人想当然地认为年轻人的职责是给他们让座，这使他们感到不愉快．这是一个复杂句，在句子some old people take it for granted that it's the young's duty to give seats to them中，it是形式宾语，真正的宾语是 that it's the young's duty to give seats to them；which makes them unpleasant是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代前边整个句子的意思"老人想当然地认为年轻人的职责是给他们让座"这件事．
 亮点句型二：Only in this way can we have a harmonious society in common．只有这样，我们才能有一个共同的和谐社会．这是一个倒装句，only引导的方式状语in this way 置于句首，句子要做部分倒装，也就是把can提前．

解答 Recently，whether the young should give their seats to the old on busesis being discussed on the internet．We classmates had a class meetingto discuss the topic． Different students have different opinions on this matter．【社会现象】
Some students are in favor of giving seats to the old．They think that respecting the old is always Chinese traditional virtue．Besides，we will be old one day and we also need others'help．What's more，giving seats to the old people is also a civilized behavior．【支持让座】
However，other students think differently．They say that the young people aren't supermen．They will also get sick and feel tired after a long day's hard work．They also need seats to rest on．As a result，the old people should try not to take buses during the rush hours．Furthermore，some old people take it for granted that it's the young's duty to give seats to them，which makes them unpleasant．（亮点句型一）【反对让座】
As far as I am concerned，no matter you are the old or the young，you ought to put yourself into others'shoes and care about others'feelings．As an old saying goes，"One for all，all for one．"Only in this way can we have a harmonious society in common．（亮点句型二）【个人观点】

点评 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．