Question

10．假设你是李华，David是你的美国网友．他对目前中国出现的雾霾天气很关注，来信向你询问此事．请你给他写封回信．
主要内容如下：
1．感谢他的关注．
2．简介雾霾 （smog） 天气给人们的身体、生活带来的危害．
3．谈谈你的感想．
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅；
开头与结尾已写好，不计人总词数；
词数：100左右
Dear David，
I'm glad to receive your letter．
．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于雾霾天气的书信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一感谢他的关注；二简介雾霾  天气给人们的身体、生活带来的危害；三自己的感想．
高分句型：
1．I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China．句子里 that 引导同位语从句，解释your letter 的内容；which引导定语从句，代指先行词the smog．
从你的来信我知道你对目前在中国的一些地方频繁出现的雾霾天气很关注．
2．Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air．句子里Only 位于句首，引导状语从句when everyone has the environmental awareness 主句can we have cleaner air用倒装．
只有每个人都有了环保意识，我们才会有更清洁的空气．

解答 Dear David，
   I'm glad to receive your letter．I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China．【高分句型一】Thank you for your concern．（感谢他的关注）I'm also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to people's health such as traffic jam，road accidents，bad coughs，throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on．（简介雾霾  天气给人们的身体、生活带来的危害）
   As everybody knows，a good environment comes from good protection．So we should do what we can to make a difference．Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products．Only when everyone has the environmental awa reness can we have cleaner air．【高分句型二】（自己的感想）
  Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写完作文以后，通读全文，检查内容是否符合要求，要点是否齐全，格式是否正确，词数是否合乎要求．最主要的是要检查句子是否符合英语习惯，句型是否正确，语法是否正确（包括句子结构、时态、语态、主谓一致等），检查单词是否误写、少写，习语搭配是否得当等，以及字母大小写、标点符号是否正确等，这就要求考生在定稿认真检查，仔细核对，及时发现并改正问题，保证要点齐全，句子完整通顺，力争减少失误．