Question

7．如图是你校2009年在水电、学生用纸、学生伙食人均费用与2008年比较的增长情况．从图表中看出，你校2009年学生的某些行为与哥本哈根世界气候大会及我国今年三月份"两会"倡导的"低碳、节能"不太相符．请你针对你校的情况，写一篇英语短文，发表在本校校园网络论坛上，告诉大家如何节能减排、建立"低碳"校园．

注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入词数；
3．内容可适当发挥，使行文连贯．
From the chart above，we can see that            ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇应用文，让考生描述图表，提出"低碳"的倡议．写作时可分为三部分：阐述现象，描述图表为第一段，分别说明水电、纸张、伙食的增长情况；第二段说明原因，提出解决措施；第三段提出倡议．描述图表时采用第三人称，阐述观点的部分使用第一人称．全篇时态使用一般现在时．
重点短语及句型：
build a"low-carbon school"建立"低碳校园"
form the habit of 养成…的习惯
saving water and electricity节约水电
turn off关闭
reduce food waste减少食物浪费
save energy节约能源
From the chart above，we can see that the cost of food，paper，water and electricity increased by 10%，8% and 15% in 2009．
从表格中我们可以看出，2009年食物、纸张、水电的消耗分别增长了10%，8%和15%．
Never leave water running unnecessarily while brushing our teeth and washing hands．
刷牙和洗手的时候永远不要让水一直流．
If we all do like this，I am sure our school will become more and more beautiful．
如果我们能这样做，我确定我们的学校将会越来越美丽．

解答 参考答案：
    From the chart above，we can see that the cost of food，paper，water and electricity increased by 10%，8% and 15% in 2009．（描述现象）As high school students，what should we do to build a"low-carbon school"in the future？（提出问题）I think we must do as follows：
    Firstly，we should form the habit of saving water and electricity．Never leave water running unnecessarily while brushing our teeth and washing hands．Meanwhile，whenever we leave classrooms or our dormitories，make sure that the lights are turned off．（措施一）Secondly，we should also save every piece of paper as well as other materials by writing on both sides of the paper or using materials to be recycled．（措施二）Thirdly，in order to reduce food waste，we should get our meals according to how much we can have．Besides，we should often offer to remind our schoolmates to save energy．（措施三）
    If we all do like this，I am sure our school will become more and more beautiful．（提出倡议）

点评 写作技巧：
（1）注意篇章结构，合理布局：开始部分（opening paragraph）--说出文中的要点、核心问题．正文部分（Body paragraphs）--围绕主题开展叙述、讨论．结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）--对全文的总结和概括．要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯．前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容． 
（2）确定主题句：主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨．它能在文章中起到"画龙点睛"的作用．通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展．写主题句应注意以下几点：①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点．②提炼出一句具有概括性的话．③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者．