假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
To be honest，as a Senior Two student，my favorite sport is football．I was a member of our school football team．We practice for three times a week and often watch football match on TV or on the Internet together．Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit．We must keep in minds that we play for the team instead ourselves．Also sport teaches us the important of obeying the rules in a match．Each player must listen to the captain，which is the leader of the team．And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game．

分析本文主要讲述作者喜欢踢足球．每周练习三次，时常观看足球比赛．作者认为踢足球能长高长壮，还能锻炼公平感和团队精神．

解答 To be honest，as a Senior Two student，my favorite sport is football．I was a member of our school football team．We practice for three times a week and often watch football match on TV or on the Internet together．Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit．We must keep in minds that we play for the team instead∧ourselves．Also sport teaches us the important of obeying the rules in a match．Each player must listen to the captain，which is the leader of the team．And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game．
详解：
1．was改为am 考查动词时态．本文讲述的是一般事实，要用一般现在时态．
2．去掉for 考查词语用法．根据句意：我们一周练习三次．此处practice为不及物动词，没有宾语，不必加介词．
3．match改为matches 考查名词复数．根据下文语境，足球比赛不止一场，要用复数形式．
4．Play改为Playing 考查动名词．分析句子结构，句中缺少主语，用动名词短语作主语．
5．give改为gives 考查动词时态．not only…but also …意为"不但…而且 …"，是固定搭配，主要用于连接两个对等的成分，其中，also可以省略． makes和gives是并列谓语．
6．minds改为mind 考查固定搭配．keep in mind意为"记住；牢记"，是固定搭配．
7．加of 考查词语用法．instead意为"替代，顶替"，是副词，instead of意为"（用…）代替…"，是介词短语，此处应是：（用…）代替…．
8．important改为importance 考查名词．定冠词the后接名词．
9．which改为who 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词the captain指人，在从句中作主语，用关系代词who．
10．they改为we 考查代词．根据句意：我们不能时常违规．用代词we．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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13．During the teenage years，hormonal （荷尔蒙的） changes lead to physical changes like rapid muscle growth，burst in height，and weight gain in both boys and girls．Take a look at the information and height and weight charts（图表） for teens presented in this article if the question"How much should I weigh for my age and height"is bothering you．
Average Height and Weight Charts for Teens
Faster growth in kids usually can be noticed at age 8．Genetic factors also affect the physical growth of a child．So，it is perfectly normal for two kids of the same age to have different weights and heights．The following figures should be used as guidelines only．

	For Boys		For Girls
Age	Height	Weight	Height	Weight
in years	in inches	in pounds	in inches	in pounds
12-13	58-62	85-100	60-63	95-105
14-15	63-66	105-125	63-64	105-115
16-17	67-70	130-150	64	115-120
18-20	68-70	150-160	64	125-130

Ideal Body Fat Percentage
Fit men have 14%-17% body fat．
Fit women have 21%-24% body fat．
Male athletes have 6%-13% body fat．
Female athletes have 14%-20% body fat．
The ideal body fat percentage varies mainly according to age，sex and the physical activity of the in-dividual．But it is a fact that some female athletes have body fat as low as 10% and some male athletes had lower than 4% body fat．So，it can be observed that other than the above mentioned factors，genetic factors also influence the body-fat ratio．
Body Mass Index （BMI）
You may use the following formula to calculate your BMI：
As per SI Units （国际单位）：BMI=mass （kg）/[height （meters）]²
Imperial （英制的） Units 1：BMI=mass （Ib．） x703/[height （in．）]²
Imperial Units 2：BMI=mass （Ib．） x 4.88/[height （ft）]²
Following conclusions can be derived from （得到） calculating the BMI：

BMI Calculated	Conclusion
BMI 18.5～25	Normal or ideal weight
BMI＞25	Overweight
BMI＜18.5	Underweight
BMI＜17.5	Extremely underweight
BMI=30 or BMI＞30	Obese（病态肥胖的）
BMI=40 or BMI＞40	Extremely obese