题目内容
【题目】假设你是北京某旅行社的兼职导游,最近一批英国客人要来北京旅游。请你根据所给提示信息写一篇欢迎词,向他们简要介绍北京。
1. 中国的首都,是政治、经济、文化中心;
2. 主要景点有长城(世界上最长的人工建筑)、故宫(世界最大、最完整的木质古建筑)颐和园(园林杰作)等,它们均被列入了世界遗产名录。
注意:1. 词数100左右(开头已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:杰作 masterpiece;故宫 the Imperial Palace;颐和园 the Summer Palace;世界遗产名录 the World Heritage List。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Beijing.
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【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Beijing. As the capital of China, Beijing is the political, economic and cultural center of the country. There are many places of interest in Beijing. The Great Wall s the longest man-made structure ever built in the world. The Palace Museum, also called the Forbidden City, is the largest and most complete ancient wooden-structure building in the world. The Summer Palace is a masterpiece of China% ancient gardens. They are all on the World Heritage List. Of course, there are many other tourist attractions for you to explore.
I hop you’ll enjoy your trip and have a good time in Beijing!
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求假设你是北京某旅行社的兼职导游,最近一批英国客人要来北京旅游。请你根据所给提示信息写一篇欢迎词,向他们简要介绍北京。注意欢迎词的格式和用语。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点:1. 中国的首都,是政治、经济、文化中心;2. 主要景点有长城、故宫(世界最大、最完整的木质古建筑)颐和园等,它们均被列入了世界遗产名录。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: places of interest名胜古迹,have a good time玩得高兴。还使用了宾语从句I hope you’ll enjoy your trip and have a good time in Beijing!等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。