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7．假设你是李华，你的朋友林涛面对全新的高中学习感到有些迷茫和无所适从，希望你给他一些学习方法方面的指导和建议．请结合以下要点，给他写一封信：
1．制定生活学习计划，合理安排时间；
2．课前预习，课上认真听讲做笔记，课后复习；
3．劳逸结合．
注意：词数100字左右（开头己给出，但不计入总词数）；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：preview预习
Dear Lin Tao，
I'm sorry to hear that you're having trouble with your schoolwork．
           ．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示给他一些学习方法方面的指导和建议，给他写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：制定生活学习计划，合理安排时间；课前预习，课上认真听讲做笔记，课后复习；劳逸结合．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
　First，you should make a schedule about your life and study，which can help you organize your time well and do everything in perfect order．（高分句型一）句中使用了非限制性定语从句
   Secondly，you should preview the new lessons before class and review what you have learned after class．（高分句型二）句中使用what引导的宾语从句
  Try to relax yourself by listening to music or doing sports whenever you can．（高分句型三）句中whenever属于时间状语从句

解答 Dear Lin Tao，
　　I'm sorry to hear that you're having trouble with your schoolwork．I'd like to give you some tips to help you deal with the problem．
　　First，you should make a schedule about your life and study，which can help you organize your time well and do everything in perfect order．（高分句型一）Secondly，you should preview the new lessons before class and review what you have learned after class．（高分句型二）In class，you should listen to the teacher carefully and try to make notes．Thirdly，don't forget to combine study with pleasure．Try to relax yourself by listening to music or doing sports whenever you can．（高分句型三）As you know，all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．
　　All the best!
                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．