题目内容
13.阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文.Dear Editor,
Recently I feel a little frustrated,so I am writing to you for advice.I have a very close friend who I have trust in.He is a very nice student who has really given others the impression of an honest guy and many times he was honored as an excellent student in our school,so in my eyes,he is so great.
But last week,when we were taking the mid-term English exam,I suddenly found that in his hand was his cell phone,he was copying something from it secretly!But the teacher didn't find this at all.When the result was announced,he was praised for getting a very good mark.
I feel shamed for him,my best friend,and for what he had done in the exam,but he teacher still believes that he is diligent and does well in English.Should I tell the teacher about his cheating in the exam?If I do so,maybe he would not understand me and would no longer regard me as a friend,and then I may lose a close friend forever.If I don't tell the truth to the teacher,he will cheat again in the next exam.What should I do?
Yours,
Jesse
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括这封信的要点.
2.以约120个词就"友情和诚实"这一主题发表你的看法,内容包括:
(1)如果你是Jesse,你会如何处理此事,并说明理由.
(2)你觉得友情和诚实哪个更重要?
(3)生活中你是怎样维护真正的友情?
【写作要求】
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接
引用原文中的句子.
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们就"友情和诚实"这一主题写一篇作文,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:如果你是Jesse,你会如何处理此事,并说明理由.你觉得友情和诚实哪个更重要?生活中你是怎样维护真正的友情?我们此篇作文分为四部分,第一部分为以约30个词概括这封信的要点.第二部分为如果你是Jesse,你会如何处理此事,并说明理由.第三部分为你觉得友情和诚实哪个更重要?第四部分为生活中你是怎样维护真正的友情?
重点短语与句型:
enable us to win respect使我们赢得尊敬
make a mistake犯错误
have a heart-to-heart talk with 和某人来一次心与心的交谈
point out指出
give him a hand给某人伸出援助之手
高分句型一:Finding his best friend cheated in the English exam,the writer felt so frustrated that he asked the editor for advice,wondering whether he should tell the teacher about the truth分词Finding,wondering做伴随状语,因为主动,所以用现在分词
高分句型二:If I were Jesse,I would let the teacher know the truth even though he is my best friend,which,I think,is really a good way to help my friend and get him aware of his mistake so that he will never cheat again.此句既有if虚拟条件句,又有非限制性定语从句,好句.
解答 Finding his best friend cheated in the English exam,the writer felt so frustrated that he asked the editor for advice,wondering whether he should tell the teacher about the truth.高分句型一(30个词概括这封信的要点)
If I were Jesse,I would let the teacher know the truth even though he is my best friend,which,I think,is really a good way to help my friend and get him aware of his mistake so that he will never cheat again.高分句型二That is for real friendship.(如果你是Jesse,你会如何处理此事,并说明理由)
Friendship and honesty are both important in our life,but in my opinion,as a student,honesty is most important of all.Being honest enables us to win respect and trust from people around.Thus I would choose honesty first.(友情和诚实哪个更重要?)
In my life,when my friend makes a mistake,I will try to help him as much as I can.For example,I will have a heart-to-heart talk with him,pointing out his mistake,But sometimes if I cannot manage myself,I will even ask my teachers or parents to give him a hand.(生活中你是怎样维护真正的友情?)
点评 第一步:审题,确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点,避免填表式或履历表式表达.
第二步:拟定提纲,创造良好的开端;叙述得体,布局谋篇;巧妙过渡,完美结尾.
第三步:遣词造句,上下衔接,地道表达,行文成篇(注意"参考词汇"的提示作用).

A. | that; that | B. | because; that | C. | that; what | D. | whether; what |
D.teachers should encourage students to voice their own opinions bravelyIt's nice to have friends.Sometimes you need one person to talk to.You can play games,hang out or even just talk on the phone.Consider these suggestions to meet people and form strong,lasting friendships.Well,take your time,and don't rush. ?Join an organization or a club with people who have common interests. You don't necessarily have a lot of common interests with people in order to make friends with them.But if you have something in common with them,it can make it a lot easier to talk to them and plan activities.Whatever your age and whatever your interests,there is an organization or a club for you.Social networking sites such as Facebook,Twitter are also a great way to meet new people and learn more about them. ?Join a sports team. As long as you enjoy the sport and support your teammates,joining a local team with a laid-back attitude could be a great way to make new friends.A sports team isn't the only way.If you play instruments or sing,try joining a band.?Make small talk. Keep the conversation light and cheery.Even if you're complaining about something,make sure it's something you're both dissatisfied with,and emphasize the positive-how such a situation can be avoided in the future.Many conversationalists say that it is good to follow a 30/70 (30% talking,70% listening) pattern during small talk when possible. ?Ask them out for lunch or coffee. That will give you a better opportunity to talk and get to know each other a little bit better.A good way to extend yourself is to say:"Hey,well,I've got to go,but if you ever want to talk over lunch or coffee or anything like that,let me give you my number or e-mail address."This gives the | person the opportunity to get in touch with you; they may or may not give you their information in return,but that's fine.Maybe they don't have time for new friends~~don't take it personally!Just offer your information to whoever seems to be potentially a good friend,and eventually somebody will get in touch. ?Be loyal(忠诚的)to a friend. You've probably heard of fair-weather friends.They're the ones who are happy to be around you when things arc going well,but are nowhere to be found when you really need them.Part of being a friend is being prepared to spare time and energy in order to help out your friends.If a friend needs help with an unpleasant thing,or if he or she just needs a shoulder to cry on,be there.If your friends make a joke,laugh with them.Never complain about a friend. ?Be a good listener. Many people think that in order to be seen as‘friend material'they have to appear very interesting.Far more important than this,however,is the ability to show that you're interested in others.Listen carefully to what people say,remember important details about them (their names,their likes and dislikes),ask questions about their interests,and just take the lime to learn more about them.You don't want to be the guy or girl that always has a better story than anyone else or that changes the subject suddenly instead of continuing the flow of conversation. ?Be trustworthy. One of the best things about having a friend is that you have someone to whom you can talk about anything,even secrets that you hide from the rest of the world.The key to being a good friend is the ability to keep secrets,so it's no secret that you shouldn't tell other people things that were told to you in confidence. |
A.Patience.B.Curiosity.C.Bravery.D.Humor.
47.Those who can enjoy a happy life together but it's hard to go through hardness hand in hand areD
A.loyal friends B.close friends C.dishonest friends D.fair-weather friends
48.While having a conversation with your friends,you should avoidB
A.applying the 30/70 pattern
B.talking too much about yourself
C.showing interest in their topics
D.knowing more details about them
49.To be a reliable friend,you'd betterC
A.have some common interests with your friends
B.find something to complain about with your friends
C.keep the secrets that your friends have told you
D.exchange your personal information with your friends.
-I'm just dressing casually-nothing _______.( )
A. | fancy | B. | amazing | C. | informal | D. | valuable |