题目内容
18.假设你是李华,Harry是你的美国笔友.在来信中谈到华盛顿的国会图书馆.你常常去北京的中国国家图书馆.于是你回信向他介绍这个图书馆.注意:
(1)信的开头已为你写好;
(2)词数不少于100.
位置面积 | 北京城西,紫竹院公园旁 24万平方米,地上19层,地下3层,世界第三 |
藏书规模 | 2200万册,居亚洲之首 |
服务项目 | 图书借阅;网上服务 |
使用观感 | 设备先进,服务优质;环境幽雅,令人享受 |
Dear Harry,
How are things going with you?Talking about famous libraries,I would like to introduce to you about our National Library.
The library,with Zi Zhuyuan Park as its neighbor,is located in the west of Beijing.It covers an area of 240,000 square meters,with 19 stories above the ground,and 3 stories underground,ranking the third in the world.(高分句型一)The library has a total collection of over 22,000,000 copies of books,the largest number in Asia.It provides readers with spacious reading rooms,convenient online service and the latest web information.(高分句型二)Its grand building,modern facilities and good service will surely leave you a very deep impression.No.9 bus can pick me up from home and drop me right in front of the library,so I often go there to study or to borrow books.I enjoy the quiet and literary atmosphere in the library.
Hope you can visit it some day and I'm looking forward to your next letter.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hu.
分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,根据提示信息Harry是你的美国笔友.在来信中谈到华盛顿的国会图书馆.你常常去北京的中国国家图书馆.于是你回信向他介绍这个图书馆,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:分别从地理位置、藏书规模、服务项目和使用观感几个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:be located in坐落于;leave sb a deep impression给某人留下深刻印象;pick up接,搭载;in front of 在…的前面;look forward to盼望;
It covers an area of 240,000 square meters,with 19 stories above the ground,and 3 stories underground,ranking the third in the world.(高分句型一)
It provides readers with spacious reading rooms,convenient online service and the latest web information.(高分句型二)
解答 Dear Harry,
How are things going with you?Talking about famous libraries,I would like to introduce to you about our National Library.The library,with Zi Zhuyuan Park as its neighbor,is located in the west of Beijing.It covers an area of 240,000 square meters,with 19 stories above the ground,and 3 stories underground,ranking the third in the world.(高分句型一)The library has a total collection of over 22,000,000 copies of books,the largest number in Asia.It provides readers with spacious reading rooms,convenient online service and the latest web information.(高分句型二)Its grand building,modern facilities and good service will surely leave you a very deep impression.No.9 bus can pick me up from home and drop me right in front of the library,so I often go there to study or to borrow books.I enjoy the quiet and literary atmosphere in the library.
Hope you can visit it some day and I'm looking forward to your next letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.