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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The person who has taught me most about the life is my grandmother.When she died a few years before, I felt I lost a really good friend.She always looked very nice on her age.She did everything she could make me feel at home.She was imaginative but would spend hours telling me stories she has made up.I am sure it was because of her which I became a story writer.Apart from kept a young boy entertained, she taught me a large number of important thing on how to behave.I was rather impatient when I was a child and she taught me that good things happened if I could wait for it.

【答案】第一处:删除most; 第二处:把before改为ago; 第三处:on改为for;

第四处:could后加to;第五处:but改为and 第六处:删除has 第七处:which改为that

第八处:kept改为keeping 第九处:thing改为things 第十处:it改为them

【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文,奶奶是我的人生导师,她不仅照顾我,而且还教我做人的道理,正是因为她的影响,我才成为了一名作家。

第一处:考查句意;句意:教我如何生活的人是我的奶奶。句中动词短语teach sb about sth教育某人某事,句中的most是多余的。所以要删除most。

第二处:考查副词。句意:当几年前,她去世的时候,我感觉到失去了一个真正的好朋友。此处表示几年以前,又与过去式连用,故用ago代替before。

第三处:考查介词。句意:在她那个年龄,她看起来真得很好。在她那个年龄用for。所以要把on改为for。

第四处:考查不定式。句意:她做了她能做的一切让我感觉在自己家里一样。句中不定式to make me feel at home。句中不定式做目的状语所以要在could后面加to。

第五处:考查连词。句意她很有想象力,也常常花几个小时给我讲她编的故事。前后两部分为顺承关系,故用and。所以要把but改为and。

第六处:考查连词。此处表示她编的故事,定语从句作后置定语。时态要与主句的 was一致。所以要删除has。

第七处:考查强调句型。句意我确信,正是因为她我才成为一个故事作家。本句考查强调句,强调介词短语because of her,强调句型的基本结构是it was...that。所以要把which改为that。

第八处:考查动名词。句意:除了让一个男孩开心之外她还教了我很多做人的重要事情介词短语apart from之后要跟动名词形式做宾语,故用keeping。所以要把kept改为keeping。

第九处:考查名词单复数句意:除了让一个男孩开心之外她还教了我很多做人的重要事情许多重要的事情,故用things。所以要把thing改为things。

第十处:考查代词此处指代good things,故用them不用it,因为it指代上文出现的单数名词所以要把it改为them。

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