题目内容
第二节:短文写作(共1题;满分30分)
请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
You cannot change the weather, but you can change your mood.
注意:
无须写标题;
除诗歌外,文体不限;
内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例;
文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
词数不少于120,如引用提示语不计入总词数。
The weather depends on the sky, but whether you are happy or not depends on yourself.
I can well remember that I didn’t pass the Chinese exam several times last year, so the weather of my sky seemed to be full of clouds. Although the songs of birds were very nice and the flowers were very beautiful, they could not let me escape from depression. What’s more, I felt that I was laughed at by all the other classmates. My Chinese teacher noticed my subtle difference, so she gave me some advice and told me to change my attitude. With the help of her, I tried to face the trouble with a positive attitude. To my surprise, everything changed. It was not long before I made great progress in my Chinese.
Life is full of difficulties. Sometimes you may not be able to decide the situation you are in, but you can change your attitude.
【解析】
试题分析:本题是一篇材料作文。题目要求根据英文提示来谈谈自己的看法和建议。作文要点要打好草稿,可以分段分别论述所给要点,注意作文的连贯性,做到流畅、自然。最好使用第一人称和一般现在时来写。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be full of充满;escape from从。。逃脱;laugh at 嘲笑;To my surprise使我感到吃惊的是;made great progress取得进步;whether you are happy or not depends on yourself.这个句子whether引导是主语从句;What’s more, I felt that I was laughed at by all the other classmates.这个句子运用到被动语态;It was not long before I made great progress in my Chinese.这个句子运用到it be not long before 。。。不久之后。。;
考点: 提纲类作文