题目内容
5.前几天,李华的小区微信群里,朋友们开展了一场关于广场舞(Square Dancing)的热烈讨论.请你根据以下内容和提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈广场舞的利与弊并说说你自己的看法.Li Hua:These years,Square Dancing has been more and more popular among old ladies.
Wang:Of course.This is a good deed.But,personally,I don't like it.
Zhang:Neither do I.It's too noisy,and my kids can't fall asleep.
Li Hua:But it is useful for them to build up their bodies and make them happy.
Zhao:Health comes first.However,we should also pay attention to public order.
Wang:If they didn't disturb me,I would support it.
Zhao:In my opinion,Square dancing should be supported because it is a form of outdoor activities.
Li Hua:At the same time,some measures should also be taken to protect others from the noise pollution.Wang:I agree.I love to live a happy life.…
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
Some people think that Square Dancing is a good deed,which can help the old build up their bodies and make them happy
些人认为广场舞是一件好事,它可以帮助老年人建立自己的身体并使他们快乐.
高分句型二:
Square Dancing should be supported.At the same time,limits and management are also required.Only in this way can we live a happy life.
广场舞应该支持.同时,也需要限制和管理.只有这样,我们才能过上幸福的生活.
解答 These years,Square Dancing has been more and more popular among old ladies.Meanwhile,it has also aroused wide concern and discussion.
As the saying goes,the first wealth is health.Some people think that Square Dancing is a good deed,which can help the old build up their bodies and make them happy(高分句型一).
But every coin has two sides.Some people argue that Square Dancing may disturb others and be bad for public order,especially the noise pollution.So,they hope some measures can be taken to protect them from the negative effects of Square Dancing.
In my opinion,we must think twice when taking Square Dancing.As a form of outdoor activities,Square Dancing should be supported.At the same time,limits and management are also required.Only in this way can we live a happy life(高分句型二).
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.
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