Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉仅及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last weekends I watched a film, 13 Going on 30. The story is about an 13-year-old girl who is eager to be an adult. She hopes she can have a beautiful face but a perfect body shape. She wants to date some handsome guy she likes. Then the magical thing happens in, and she gets everything. But she feels confusing, because her life changes total. I had the same feeling as the girl when she was at her ago. But now, when I looked back on it, I think we should value what we have. Every stage of life have its happiness, so there is no need skip any stage.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】1.an改为a考查冠词，一个13岁的女孩a 13-year-old girl，故将an改为a。

2.but改为and考查连词，她希望有一张漂亮的脸和一幅完美的身材。是并列关系，故将but改为and。

3.guy改为guys考查名词复数，some handsome guys一些帅气的男孩，用可数名词复数形式，故将guy改为guys。

4.happens后边的in去掉考介词，happen是不及物动词，后边没有带宾语不需要介词，故将in去掉。

5.confusing改为confused句意：她感觉困惑，用动词ed形式，故将confusing改为confused。

6.total改为totally句意：因为她的生活完全改变了。完全地totally副词作状语，故将total改为totally。

7.she改为I句意：当我在她那个年纪的时候有过同样的感受。故将she改为I。

8.looked改为look根据时间状语now可知是现在的情况，用一般现在时态，故将looked改为look。

9.have改为has考查主谓一致，主语是every stage of life谓语动词用单数形式，故将have改为has。

10.need后边加to句型there is no need to do something没有必要做某事，故在need后边加to。