题目内容
【题目】高中生在成长过程中会碰到一些烦恼。就这一话题你班正筹备召开一次主题班会。请你依据下表进行必要的思考，并用英语准备一篇到会发言材料。
Pains | Solutions |
相貌、体形不美 | 不必在意 |
不被他人理解，朋友少 | 加强沟通 |
学习成绩落后，压力大 | ？ |
零花钱不多 | ？ |
注意:
1．词数150左右；开头已给出,不计入总词数.
2．写作必须包含表中所列内容,可以适当发挥,使得上下文意思连贯.
Boys and girls:
We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely....
【答案】
Boys and girls:
We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. First of all, some of us are upset about their figures and looks. Personally, I argue that it is one's inner beauty that really matters. That is why we needn't care about it.
Second, when we are misunderstood by our teachers, parents or even classmates, we can find a proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, as communication is the best way to remove misunderstandings. Some of us complain they have few true friends. Being open-minded and ready to help others will surely gain popularity among peers.
Third, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. Determined to work efficiently, we can overcome any difficulty. If necessary, we may turn to the teachers for help.
Last, some of us don't have much pocket money, so they feel unhappy. Isn't it strange? So long as we have some, that's enough. We high school students should learn to save, as saving is a good virtue of the Chinese, shouldn’t we?
That's all. Thank you.
【解析】
试题分析：本文要求就高中生在成长过程中会碰到一些烦恼准备一篇发言材料。要点已给出，写作时要针对要点逐个发表自己的看法，语句要通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语发言稿，共分三段，内容齐全，布局合理，使用高级句子。We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. but表示转折关系；I argue that it is one's inner beauty that really matters.强调句式经典至极；That is why we needn't care about it. Why引导表语从句；when we are misunderstood by our teachers, parents or even classmates, we can find a proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, as communication is the best way to remove misunderstandings.when引导的时间状语从句和as引导的原因状语从句完美结合；Being open-minded and ready to help others will surely gain popularity among peers. 动名词作主语恰到好处；we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. which引导非限制性定语从句；Determined to work efficiently, we can overcome any difficulty.过去分词作状语；If necessary, we may turn to the teachers for help.使用省略句；So long as we have some, that's enough. So long as引导条件状语从句；as saving is a good virtue of the Chinese, shouldn’t we?反意疑问句画龙点睛；另外，First of all, Personally, Second, Last为文章增色添彩。
