题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是李华,前几天你收到了你的朋友Vince的来信,询问你的高三生活,你打算在回信中介绍以下三个方面的内容:
1.生活安排; 2.学习计划; 3.理想的大学及专业。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Vince,
I'm very glad to hear from you._________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Vince,
I'm very glad to hear from you. In your letter, you asked me about my Senior Three life. Nowadays I'm very busy with my exams and homework. So I need to balance my study and life to make it colorful and meaningful.
I believe doing sports every day may build up my body. Besides, communicating with teachers, parents and friends can be of help to reduce my pressure. As for my study, I've made a practical plan. I should also overcome my shyness to consult the teachers if there's something making me confused. What's more, improving English is the most urgent thing because I have to make a solid foundation for my dream university—Shanghai International Studies University, where I'd like to major in English. I really hope my dream will come true through my hard work.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:假如你是李华,前几天你收到了你的朋友Vince的来信,询问你的高三生活,你打算在回信中介绍以下三个方面的内容:1.生活安排;2.学习计划;3.理想的大学及专业。这是一篇提纲类作文,需要考生用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,应注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点说明】文章简洁明了,把需要表达的要点清晰的表达了出来,并且做了适当的扩展,其间也运用了一些连接词和高级的句型。Communicating with teachers, parents and friends can be of help to reduce my pressure.和老师父母以及朋友聊天对于减轻我的压力有帮助。此句中采用了非谓语作主语的形式来表达。Shanghai International Studies University , where I'd like to major in English.上海国际大学是我想去主修英语的地方。此举采用了非限制性定语从句。其间,还用了besides, What's more等连接词,使文章更加连贯。