Question

短文改错

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则改正：

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear Sir，

    I'm glad to recommend （推荐） to you my friend Li Ming.

    Li Ming was born on July 15， in 1974 in Beijing.         1. _______

    He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986.            2. _______

    When he was in the middle school， he did good in maths， 3. _______

    physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating   4. _______

    from No.4 High School， he entered into Beijing           5. _______

    University study physics. After four years of hard        6. _______

    work there， he went to the United States for farther     7. _______

    study. Because of his excellent work， he get a doctor's  8. _______

    degree in physics this year.He is now in good health

    but would like to make contributions to our               9. _______

    country. I should be most grateful if you would favorably consider my recommendation.

    Looking forward to receive your early reply.              10. ______

    Yours truly，Wang Li

Answer 1

1. 删去1974前的in.

    2. 此行无错。

3. good改为well.

4. fond前加was.

    5. 删去into.

    6. study前加to.

7. farther改为further.

8. get改为got.时态错误。

9. but改为and.

10. receive改为receiving.

解析:

1. 删去1974前的in.时间状语是年、月、日的只需用一个介词；但若是年、月、日、时的，则要用at six thirty， on the morning of May 4th，2001.

    2. 此行无错。

    3. good改为well.固定词组be good at，do well in意为"在……学得很好".

    4. fond前加was.动词谓语残缺错误。fond是形容词，and引导并列谓语结构，故用词组was fond of.

    5. 删去into.动词enter是及物动词，直接接宾语。

    6. study前加to.此处用不定式短语作目的状语。

    7. farther改为further.farther意为"更远的"，表示实际距离；further意为"深远的，进一步的"，指抽象概念， 这里为"深造学习"，应用further study.

    8. get改为got.时态错误。

    9. but改为and.根据上下文逻辑，前后两分句为并列递进关系，而非转折关系。

    10. receive改为receiving.look forward to中的to为介词，后面应接名词或动名词。