Question

 短文改错

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则改正：

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

After I finished the school this year，I began to        1. _______

    look for work. Now several month later， I still hadn't  2. _______

    found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning 3. _______

    I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4. _______

    He said to me on the phone， "I hear you do very         5. _______

    well in your studies. I may provide a job for you." I entered 6. _______

    his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I       7. _______

    will go through the job -hunting talk today and he would8. _______

    take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised，     9. _______

    what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.      10. ______

Answer 1

1. 删去the.

    2. month改为months.

    3. interested后加in.

    4. him改为himself.

5. do改为did.

 6. 此行无错。

7. beaten改为beating.

 8. will改为would.

    9. surprised改为surprise.

    10. said后加was.

解析:

1. 删去the.冠词错误。finish school意为"完成学业， 毕业"， school为抽象名词， 前不加冠词。

    2. month改为months.名词单复数错误。several修饰可数名词复数形式。

    3. interested后加in.介词错误。be interested in是固定词组。

    4. him改为himself.代词错误， 根据文意应为"自称是".

    5. do改为did.动词错误。句意应为"我听说你（过去）学习不错"， 因为现已毕业。

    6. 此行无错。

    7. beaten改为beating.非谓语动词错误。a beating heart相当于a heart which is beating.

    8. will改为would.动词时态错误。主句是过去时，宾语从句要用相应的时态。

    9. surprised改为surprise.to one's surprise/joy为习语搭配，只能是名词。

    10. said后加was.动词谓语漏用错误。What he said是主语从句，was disappointing是谓语。