题目内容
4.假定你是李华,你的英国网友Anna在她学校举办的一次作文比赛中荣获一等奖,你写信向她表示祝贺,并在信中谈及自己在英语写作上存在的困难,希望得到她的帮助.注意:
1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和具体学校信息.
Dear Anna,
I am very glad to learn thatyou have won the first prize in your school's English writing contest.And I am writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your excellent performance.
It's a real encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded.How I admire your writing skills!I have been learning English for several years and I have little trouble in listening,speaking and writing.However,I find it hard to write a good composition.Although I've put a lot of efforts into it,I just can't find a way out.I feel stressed out.I would appreciate it if you could give me some specific advice on it.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
How I admire your writing skills!I have been learning English for several years and I have little trouble in listening,speaking and writing
我多么羡慕你的写作技巧!我已经学了几年的英语,我有点小麻烦在听力、口语和写作.
高分句型二:
Although I've put a lot of efforts into it,I just can't find a way out.I feel stressed out.I would appreciate it if you could give me some specific advice on it.
虽然我已经做了很大的努力,我就是找不到出路.我觉得压力太大.我想如果你能给我关于它的一些具体建议,不胜感激.
解答 Dear Anna,
I am very glad to learn that you have won the first prize in your school's English writing contest.And I am writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your excellent performance.
It's a real encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded.How I admire your writing skills!I have been learning English for several years and I have little trouble in listening,speaking and writing(高分句型一).However,I find it hard to write a good composition.Although I've put a lot of efforts into it,I just can't find a way out.I feel stressed out.I would appreciate it if you could give me some specific advice on it(高分句型二).
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.
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