Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，你校下周将要举办名为“My Song, My Life”面向所有英文歌曲爱好者的英文歌曲演唱比赛。请给美国朋友彼得写信邀请他参赛，要点如下：

1. 比赛介绍，包括比赛名称、比赛要求、比赛目的等；

2. 在选歌方面给他建议，比如歌曲类型、歌曲风格或歌曲题目等；

3. 表达你对他的信心，鼓励他参赛。

注意：词数100左右。开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

How are you? It’s a long time since I heard from you. ____________________________

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How are you? It’s a long time since I heard from you. I’m writing to tell you that our school will hold an English song singing competition next week and I’d like to invite you to take part in it. With the name “My Song, My Life”, this competition aims to arouse our interest in studying English as well as bring more fun to our routine school life. The only requirement of the competition is that you have to sing English songs. Everyone can participate in it if he or she is confident enough.

Personally, I suggest you sing a motivating song such as You Raise Me Up, with which you can not only impress the judges but also encourage every student present at the competition. Since you have such a beautiful voice, I’m confident that you will enjoy yourself in the competition. So why not join us and have fun?

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假定你是李华，你校下周将要举办名为“My Song, My Life”面向所有英文歌曲爱好者的英文歌曲演唱比赛。请给美国朋友彼得写信邀请他参赛，要点如下：1.比赛介绍，包括比赛名称、比赛要求、比赛目的等；2.在选歌方面给他建议，比如歌曲类型、歌曲风格或歌曲题目等； 3.表达你对他的信心，鼓励他参赛。 注意：词数100左右。开头和结尾已为你写好。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

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